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The To-Do List

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/23/08

Oh dear!

Real life huh? Heheh. Sounds so familiar.

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by Anonymous07/23/08

Freaking Awesome!!!!!

This was a fantastic story of a loving wife. Hell, it had everything, realism, fun, work and sex. All you needed was a nice steak on the bbq to make it complete. Thanks for the great story.

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by sherlock4007/23/08

A rarity in this category

An actual loving wife. If your not careful, you will upset those "authors" that think betrayal is somehow erotic. I loved your story and I think it fits this category like a glove.

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by gatorhermit07/23/08

Well Written and Realistic Story

I liked this story - good pacing and good character development. Romantic and funny.

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by bruce2207/24/08

This was a romantic loving wife

instead of a cheating loving wife story. Enjoyed it. Thanks!

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by peggytwitty07/24/08

Now this is a LW couple who are into each other

Great fantasy and I am just jealous of those bygone days. You did a very good job of love and lust of two people who really know what fun and love can be.
You do need to proof read a bit but it was great entertainment.PT

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by Anonymous07/13/11

What the hell is this??

Is this supposed to be a story? Where is it ??

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by tazz31707/13/11

wrong category

THIS WAS A STORY. IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN IN HUMOR AND SATIRE, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by bdoggriffen07/13/11

like it

short fun slice of life story. Nice ending line!

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by tazz31706/27/12

#2 THE LAST THING SHOULD ALWAYS BE

ME, ME AND THEN US. tk u mlj lv nv

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by Huedogg210/17/12

WOW, a real LW

this was awesome

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by betrayedbylove02/18/13

Excellent

Ah love is grand is it not?

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by tazz31705/05/14

THIS TO-DO LIST

sans any work could be a bucket list, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by IronDragon05/05/14

Real Life, or damn close to it!

Reminds me of my own Honey-Do List and the rewards of completing it! ;)

5 Solid Stars for a real Loving Wife!

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by Anonymous06/17/16

Honey-Do

Honey-Do lists are the best, But the rewards are even better.

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