*sighs* I wrote this on a dare. A friend on another writing site timed me for 30 minutes to see if I could come up with a sex story. This is very lacking of organization and detail... I have no idea why anyone likes it.
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Anonymous08/08/08
Too hot for words
Your writing really grabs me... I felt as if I was there with you and taking the place of Greg. I wanted you so badly as I worked through your story...
by
Anonymous08/28/08
Continue Please
Well blue rose, if you can write a story as good as this in under 30 minutes you must have a fine dirty mind and a talent for writing good pornography. So please give us more. You have made a great start.
English
That was amazing!!!
That was highly erotic!!! The passionhad me hard!!!. I loved it.
The blue rose herself
*sighs* I wrote this on a dare. A friend on another writing site timed me for 30 minutes to see if I could come up with a sex story. This is very lacking of organization and detail... I have no idea why anyone likes it.
Too hot for words
Your writing really grabs me... I felt as if I was there with you and taking the place of Greg. I wanted you so badly as I worked through your story...
Continue Please
Well blue rose, if you can write a story as good as this in under 30 minutes you must have a fine dirty mind and a talent for writing good pornography. So please give us more. You have made a great start.
Great story
All I can say is you had me from the start, that was a hot story. Please keep writing!
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