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Great Work
Keep it coming - this is an excellent story and well written especially for a beginner - Props for you!
To add....
Thanks for the compliment, you can't know how great it felt to read that you like my story. i just hope i get more feedback so i can help write for the readers. I hope many of you like this and vote on it! I gave myself a 50, i didn't think it was too bad. Thanks guys!
I'm curious
... to read where you will lead Hailey next. Keep writing, please.
Alright...
Alright sooo I just started to read it, and the first chapter actually did draw me into reading more. I would really like to see this story go somewhere and I think it has the potential of a great story. I dont know if you'd like tips or idea's...but if you do you could just ask away lol. I have lots of idea's in my head thats floating around...So I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be looking out for it.
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