This storyline has so much potential! You easily can add another 10 chapters! I hope you do!
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Anonymous05/05/08
Sambo
Now your even sending your self comments, how sad.Story is garbage, like all your stuff.
by
Anonymous05/05/08
S O S
S___ O__ S___! [You fill in the blanks as you know what they are!] All you have done is cut and paste basically same stories over and over again with a name change which is emblematic of a non-writer who plagiarizes stories. All the negative criticisms about your copied, non-stories are very correct and on the mark! I consider you to be an absolute abomination and embarrassment to the black race as well as to humanity in general. Just for the record, I am a highly educated black male in the USA who enjoys reading good erotica [not your copied abusive 'garbage and junk'] for the sake of entertainment.
Copied from other tales; Cut and Paste; NOT original!
English
AHHH YEAH!
This storyline has so much potential! You easily can add another 10 chapters! I hope you do!
Sambo
Now your even sending your self comments, how sad.Story is garbage, like all your stuff.
S O S
S___ O__ S___! [You fill in the blanks as you know what they are!] All you have done is cut and paste basically same stories over and over again with a name change which is emblematic of a non-writer who plagiarizes stories. All the negative criticisms about your copied, non-stories are very correct and on the mark! I consider you to be an absolute abomination and embarrassment to the black race as well as to humanity in general. Just for the record, I am a highly educated black male in the USA who enjoys reading good erotica [not your copied abusive 'garbage and junk'] for the sake of entertainment.
Copied from other tales; Cut and Paste; NOT original!
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