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FABULOUS story Jack
what a wonderfiul well written well crafted quiet story. I am very happy I spent the time on this early Monday morning to read this. Great great story
...But It's Worth It.
This was an EXCELLENT story. The characters had appeal and were developed just enough to get the flavor of their personalities and lives. I was really able to get into it. These two REALLY love each other, and it showed. Kudos on a job well done!
Great
This is one of your best stories yet!
Boyd
Beautiful
This is a true Loving Wife. I don't care what anyone else thinks, this is the very definitin of love.
Great
thank you. enjoyed it very much.
Very nice
Thanks for a good read. PAPATOAD
Well Done!
The perfect way to start the day.
Thank you
Thank you for your Story. It shed a little light on my current situation.
Wow!
This is, truly, a lovely piece of writing. 'Nuff said.
-- KK in Texas
Better than ever!
Jack you have always written well and produced some great stories, but this is the best ever! Great characters and a flow that just drew me in, perfect!
Wonderful story
This was a very touching story, I could almost see the story play out as I read it. BRAVO!!!!
A nice romance, Jack ...
with a touch of sweetness and more than a hint of reality.
This story should help a lot of authors (and readers) understand that passion is about love, not sex.
Great read - that's what it's all about!
Regards, Jack
Touching
You have me wondering about his heart attack. I had 100% blockage along with a 70% and 50% but I did not have a heart attack. The capilliaries took over for the artery and when they looked into the matter the flow before and after the blockage was equalized. They did bypass it when they did the other two but it was not really necessary.
Bryn Mar has a very reasonable scholary sector. Their chemistry department had extremely good people and they produced excellent future Ph.D's. I admit that they had I lot of highly social girls but it was not a place were serious people could not live!
A Wonderful Tale
I really appreciated the warmth of this story. If every man and woman could find their soul mates like these two have there would be no cheating wife stories, no divorce court and a lot more well adjusted children in the world. Thank you for writing such a moving story.
Charley
All around fine story
Well-written; a great deal of "realness," which I like. Finely balanced and sweet romance, with a smattering of hot sex. Thanks.
Nice story!
Once again great story.
Loved It!
Thanks for your story, I really enjoyed it.Life is hard, but with the right person, it's all more than worth it.Keep writing!
NICE!
Unusually well written; stands out amongst this collection.
Lovely!
This is what life is really like.Thank you.
Damn! I've got to start reading more Romance!
What a lovely story! I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for all the time, energy and talent you put into your writing and into entertaining your readers. I'm headed back to your site to find some more.
DITTO
All the rest have said it. Thank you Mike from Texas
Sweet Story
Really enjoyed the story, as usual. Well written, short and sweet.
Been there, Done that
Loved this story, been the guy in the bed, seeing my wife sitting there on the occasions that I came to, also been the the person sitting next to the bed. A lot more reality than all the gangbangs and cheating spouses. A true Loving Wife
Kudos
I really enjoyed this story. Now this is a happy ending in a feel-good story. Too bad there aren't many more of this type of story on the Literotica website. They mostly seem to be the "Burn the bitch/dick story". Or even worse the "My wife is a whore and I love it" type of story.
Great feel good story..........
This is a great story about a wonderful loving and very real couple. Thank you for sharing this feel good story with the rest of us.
Your talents as a writer are superb. Even though it has been over two years since your last posting on this site, I sincerely hope you consider writing and posting in the near future.
Thank you, again.
What a wonderful story for a change.
This is truly a loving wife who truly loved her husband and her action confirmed that fact. It's nice to read a story without a cheating wife or a wimp husband, well done.
A true Loving Wives tale
Great to see a story where the spouses love each other..and live it.
Love the story
;)
Simply
Great! Thank you!
Good
True, deep characters that have good hearts and are dedicated.
Nice Change
So good to read a story about a true loving wife vs. the usual slut, swinger, or cheat that normally populates this category. An excellent read. Thanks for sharing.
fantastic
Great story heartfelt,loving,giving two real people in love.
Ron
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