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by Texas Tease05/05/08

What?

So, your main character shook himself awake, and then proposed to himself? There were a few rough patches in this story where it was hard to follow exactly what was happening - it detracted from the overall flow.

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by Egmont Grigor05/05/08

To Texas Tease

Sorry about the name blip. Very unprofessional of me. However, if you are unable to cope with adult writing that is perhaps a little patchy I should write a primer for you. Cheers. EG

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by Anonymous03/02/09

Ah yes here is a primer.

A bood called Dick and Jane. Please notice the characters dont randomly switch names nor do they just around in scenes. It was a cute concept but the development was not good.

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