Encountering the Darkness

Wow. I'm blown away

I had no idea I'd get a story like this when I opened it. I read 3:45 first and expected something much more vanilla I guess, but this really blew me away. It sounds like you really understand the darkness that we all have inside. You write passionately and romantically even on a topic like this one. Keep writing, please.

Excellent!!

I really liked this story and it's focus on the psychological /more subtle aspects of Dominance /submission. You obviously know in depth of the subtle dynamics going on in this sort of relationships.

Very well written also. Bravo, it was a most refreshing story amidst all the more 'perverted'[not that I dont like those :)] stories here on 'LIT' dealing with BDSM.

Simply astonishing

I loved it!!! Especially the ending, where she is struggling with the inner conflict of being raised a nurturer. The insight you had, the way you were able to capture conflict with words, was beyond amazing. 5 stars!!!

I loved it. Your connection with him, feeling his pain, hurting with him as you gave more was so intriguing. Great job!

Pain and Love

You describe the wonderful emotion of receiving pain from someone you love and from whom you take the pain given