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by Anonymous05/15/08

was soo lovely

this was so beautiful

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by LaLaLoser06/21/09

i dont normally do this..

okie, so im not much of the type to commnt but i just wanted t say that your a extremly good writer and no matter what others say, you shouldnt ever stop writing. Ive spent the past two days reading Leader Of The Pack and Mira. When i was about to leave your page i noticed the poems....I just felt the need to tell you this poem really touched me, the whole time reading it, i couldnt stop thinking of my ex. Ill admit i even shed a few tears... Thank you for allowing me to read your writing..
---Love Peace And Happiness
--Love Is Love
[[LaLaLoser]]

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by r3sp1t303/04/12

Wow

I loved it, felt the iambic feel was a little forced at times but it still flowed.

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