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by Anonymous

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by _Lady1SensuaL1Fire_04/13/05

Delicious

Your story wasnt long winded, nor was it overdone, it was simply delicious. easily said.

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by katie_07/25/06

Quick, dirty and hot - great

I love it. Short and sweet, you leave just enough description up to the mind. Hot and steamy, we need a whole category of stories that are "quick and dirty!"

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by Anonymous05/20/09

lost me at the start

its hard to get into a story when dimensions aren't factual. a man standing 6'5 with muscle weight of 240 would make him really skinny. probably with a 28 waist. no one, except maybe a few gay guys, is going to find that attractive, and certainly not intimidating.

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