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Gillian Newark's School Tales Ch. 09

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by Anonymous05/11/08

Great series

How about Annabel's baby's father being Alvin, Annabel and Pete's father. He wouldn't be able to criticize Pete and Gillian, and we don't know what his wife did or said that would handle him!

If or however you continue, I'm sure it will be as good as the rest of your work that I've read.

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by Anonymous05/14/08

Any more dares please?

A nice happy ending for Gillian and a sexy love story. Well done. My personal preference is that Zack is Annabels husband and he probably still has his mobile phone with him.

I have enjoyed the story but am feeling a bit let down as I was hoping for a couple more dares for Pete and Gillian. How about a flashback when Gillian remembers a final fling dare after Pete has done his exams and Gillian has handed in her notice and is willing to risk something at school. Or for the impregnation fans out there Gillian was dared to get pregnant by Pete that sounds like there might be an interesting story behind it.

Cheers.

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