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The story is getting really good Molly ... Being a romantic at heart, I can't wait to see where it leads for them, and the Richards angle is really getting ineresting
Very Interesting story
Hi, Well at first I thought the chapters were a little small, But the story more than made up for it. PLEASE continue it :) I love a Well told story. I will be reading the rest of your submissions. Thanks Robert
Good Story, but you need a better editor!
Since I used to be an editor and proofreader of legislation, speeches, etc., for the Legislature in my state, I automatically proofread everything I read. There are so many grammatical and punctuation errors in this story. However, the story line and most of the writing is very good. Just needs some attention to detail. I'd be happy to edit for you.
please post more of this!!
At first i thought the story was a little slow, but then the last few chapters really woke me up! i am a big romance reader on this site and i really wanna see where this goes. and the drama of the richards guy is great. please write more!!
Moreeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzzz loved it
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