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Trainee Nurse Becomes a Woman

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by Anonymous05/12/08

Good but...

Good, but it can be a little confusing and choppy. You might want to consider using an editor, but it's still very readable and enjoyable.

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by Anonymous09/21/09

Its a style

Nothing wrong with the writing. It is a style and you do it remarkably well.

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