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The Pregnancy Trap Ch. 04

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by Anonymous05/12/08

Incredible...

I enjoyed the way you focused on the small details of the tryst, but more imnportantly, you interwove lust and love together for the two lovers. The actual act itself was portrayed with as much passion as gentleness and warmth. I felt I could almost feel what the lovers were experiencing. Very good read! One of the best!

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by Anonymous05/13/08

Wow!

You're the best author on here hands down. Any chance of a final Infidelity Revisited chapter???

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by Anonymous12/18/08

Trash is trash, always throw out the trash.

A slut that gets pregnant when cheating has about as much self worth as a crack whore.

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by Anonymous03/26/09

The Honeypot

Play turns to passion, lust turns to love and the juices flow freely. A very sensuous story of mutual seduction, I think they will stay happy! An attraction like that can be overwhelming. A well composed story with nice slippery details.

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by Anonymous10/02/11

sweet

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