All Comments on 'Uncle Fucks Drunk Niece'

Is 21 not 18. She's legal to fuck, but not to drink. So, how could she have been begging you to "go out drinking with her"

Loved the story!

Don't forget her cherry ass! Keep it up although I don't know how you're going to write off the whole pregnancy thing. Sounds risky.

How is this just considered incest versus non-consent? I know it's just a story but how will he explain getting his own niece pregnant and the circumstances that led to it? Obviously he doesn't care about being found out.

The beginning read like a old dirty joke, but you finished off nicely. Your male characters are so demented, it's absolutely shameless. Keep writing, I'm curious to find out what your warped mind "cums" up with next.

Hope she gets knocked up

I trashed your first story dude. But this story was much better! You got rid if the insane exagerations (although some exageration is a good thing), and you were not so repetitive. You have potential.

I read your first story and didn't say anything to trash it because despite all its problems it still managed to be pretty hot. And grammar and spelling wise, this one is much better, while still retaining the psychopathic kind of sexy thing you've got going on.

But there's one thing I can't take anymore. You apparently have no concept of female anatomy. Seriously, go do some research, google some *scientific* drawings, particularly about hymens. It's jarring and distracting.

sorry but this story reads like a 18 year old put his wet dreams on paper. too much "she said, I said". that makes it really hard to actually get into the story. sounds more like porn commentary...

Legal age to drink is 18 in some countries, legal age to have sex is also 16 in some countries eg: Australia.

So THINK or use your brain even slightly before you make a dumbass comment. Not every country follows the same laws fucking american dumb shit.

Anyway, back to the story, didn't like the whole blood thing, not all girls bleed, infact most don't.

Also didn't like the pregnant thing, almost ruined a good story. Also a few grammatical errors but not that many.

Kepp up the good work!

<3

Lady

loved the story, was a bit stop and go but was fair hot. to the people commenting going off about legal ages in other countries he's obviously talking about america as they are going to an american basebal game so perhaps they should check their facts first hmmm? any ways, read a few of your stories and i'm a fan

Very nice story...

Enjoyed a lot and also did intercourse with my husband,he also did wide my ass hole,as he is also a permanent user of double dozes of Via- gra,so I am still

feeling great pain on both places,ashe without giving any rest kept on his riding on me.

Although the story is very good,however,its not fair for an Uncle to pop the

cheery of his nice,when she drunk.

You revealed a gorgeous scene. I cannot hardly wait for your ongoing chapters. YES! He got a belly on her, I just know it! Thank you

i love your detail

sure wish i was your niece - i'm wet and ready to cum just reading it.

I need an uncle like this.... play with me

You must be writing this from your prison cell. Because this is clearly rape.

got my pussy wet....you can drop your cum load in me uncle!!!!

It's not hot when it's rape :/ This should be in the non-consent section, this was actually upsetting to read in places.

who the hell yells out "DON'T POP MY CHERRY!" and "YOU TOOK MY VIRGINITY!" in the middle of intercourse?. and "I'm honored to take your cherry" ?? really? worst writing skills ever.

the hymen is at the entrance of the vagina. there's no sticking it in until you hit the hyen. Go rape an anatomy 101 book.

CONTINUE

thats b.s.

I can dig incest stories... But NOT rape stories... This was definitely a rape story... Please, stop writing, and take a hammer to your hands... Thanks!

The hero of the story or the writer??? LOL

So let me get this, this guy fucks his niece, a big no no, AND he realy wants to have proof(probably to make things easier for police) and realy wants to make her pregnant, to hammer the nails in his coffin??ROFL

All the people out there should relize that this series seams to be an off shoot of the Aunt Lisa one you've got going. I could be wrong but the names are the same and so is the situation. If it is then what is here fits with what is there and its all good. Check it out.

5/5 and a fav

(^_^)

Blessed Be

WELL I'LL REMEMBER KEVGOW AND NOT TO READ YOUR STORYS THERE NOTHING BUT IMMATURE RAPE STORY AND I HATE THAT ABUSE TO FEMALES

YOUR STORY THIS ONE IS ""SHIT"" ....................................R.....................................

If you have nothing positive to say, that's fine; you're entitled to your opinion and this is the place for opinions to be shared. BUT--the least you could do is own up to the fact that it's YOUR opinion!

Stop hiding behind being "anonymous" and sign in as a Literotica user. You put other people down but you are lazy (at best), wimpy cowards whom evidently don't want anyone to know they're reading perverted smut. (No offense meant, KEVGOW, i happen to like perverted smut, after all, isn't that why we're all here? ;-p )

they resort to the "n" word. For the rest of you, we'd take you more seriously if you weren't trying to take the moral high road from the incest section, you telling us we're sick/perverted for liking a story with a 'rape' scene is like an alcoholic looking down on a drug addict. The only one who buys your 'outrage' is YOU.

You really need to write a part 3. But just uncle and niece. Amazing

Nobody forced them to read. They are to stupid to know where the back space button is. Also simple fact they have no life there for bitch to seen important in their own deluded weak little world.

i've been cumming in my nece's pussy for the last 5 yrs since she turned 20.

I fucked my niece to and I loved it im still fucking her its been 5 years since I fucked her first I ain't fucked anybody but her since then I don't want to were so much in love I love the way my cock feels in my nieces pussy im trying to get her pregnant c

my niece started out just sucking me off, then out of no where she begged me to fuck her she was 19 and i was 39. i have to say it was great that first time and got better with the next 20 to 30 times.now she lives with me again and i can't wait to fuck her more.

So did you post the video on the internet? I wanna watch it!!!

It needs to be in the non-consent category.

Yeah, agree with the last poster, definitely in the wrong category, lol! The 'fixed' bit was an interesting twist because Ive been thinking of a story with a similar twist, the guy being fixed but the girl not knowing and thinking she was getting knocked up. Heh. ...of course if this wasnt fantasy, she would prolly cut his balls off when she woke up sore and hung over in the morning, lol.

I read this 2 times while jerking off and I came so fucking hard! Awesome awesome awesome!!!

Absolutely juvenile and not believable.

From what I can tell this is supposed to be the story of how jim fucked his niece from forcing aunt lisa but the author didn't bother to use the same name for the niece in both stories even though they referenced the story forcing aunt lisa just makes the writer look to lazy to even try to make the connection work

Pants on fire! Niece get the belly?

Uncle Jim RAPED his niece !! What a liar ...I am fixed. , don't worry,you won't get pregnant!!

People here complaining about it being an actual rape story. Idiots the lot of you. You were fine enough to read the entire thing but then you call the author a Peado?

the lil whore was teasing the dick for a taste he should hav buttholefuckt her i wood

as soon as we got in the motel room i would have talked the teasing lil slut too burry her face in my asscracki and enjoy her licking my butthole yea thats right my butthole.

That was a RAPE.

Idiots complaining about the rape in the story but yet your reading an incest category. You have a problem with rape but not incest, that there clearly shows you all complaining are incapable of good judgment.

KEVGOW- great story! Very much enjoyed it!

My uncle fucks me so good. I love it when he cums inside me. Just thinking about him makes me soaking wet.

He should have talked her into giving him a blowjob and seeing how far she could put his cock down her through and just keep on pushing her head down on his cock till she started gaging on it she would have loved that probably!!!!!

I almost liked this story but I hated how he kept lying to her.

One minute thats all...i wont take your virginity...i wont cum in you.

LIES! LIES! LIES!

I don't give a shit about any adult having sex as long as both want it to happen, But I hate rape. this was done to a family member - In this type of situation she should tell. And apart from the police getting involved her family - mum &amp; dad should kick fuck out of this vile rapist.

AS A PRETEEN BOY I WAS ALWAYS GANG GRABED BY MY MATES IN SCHOOL AND ON THE BLOCK MY PARROLED UNCLE OFTEN SAW THIS AND TOOK NOTICE TO HOW I HAD A BIGGER R OUNDER ASS THAN MOST WOMEN HE KNEW WHEN RAIN DAMMAGED THE ROOF ABOVE UNCLES ROOM MOMMADE HIM SLEEP IN MY ROOM AFTER SHOWERS HE GOT IN BED WITH ME NAKED I STARRED AT HIS HUGE DICK AND HANGIN BALLS INCHES AWAY AS HE STRADLED MY FACE CRALLING OVER MY BODY HE NOTICE MY LOOK AND STOPED OVER MY FACS WANT THIS HE SEAD AND LOWERED IT INTO MY OPEN MOUTH IT TASTED DIFFRENT BUT GOOD HE FUCKED MY MOUTH AND FINGERED MY BUTT WHEN HE GOT BONER HE BUTTFUCKED ME SO GOOD I KEP BEGGIN FOR MORE DICK HE BUTTFUCK KAREN MY MOM ALSO SHE DIDNT KNOW HE DID ME

Looks like thats all you could do you dumb fuck. No one gonna hive you their virginity without a shitload of drinks.

I thought your story was great! It wasn't rape, she consented at every step. Waiting for

Pt.2,Morning wood!

Was your main character so desperate for sex that he raped his own niece?

really mad at people saying this is rape. first of all, ITS FICTION. secondly, rape AND incest is illegal so if u have a problem with rape you must have a problem with incest so why you here? and thirdly, this is an erotica site. the writer is trying to turn us on. i have touched myself to this so many times (i'm female) and it never fails to make me cum. thank you writer!

Well first off, you can tell by the way you write and your tone and attitude (the poster) that you're clearly a guy, lol. It's obvious as fuck. Secondly, illegal has nothing to do with it. Consensual incest may be against the law, but it's still consensual. Rape is rape. It the writer wants to write that, fine, there are plenty of people that might want to read that from time to time and get off on it. But it belongs in it's own section, not in the incest section. The fact that it was his niece is a side issue. I dob't know why I'm bothering to explain this to someone who is probably under age (also obvious in your writing) and shouldn't be here anyway. Go turn the tv on and watch some Naruto or something.

What a vile thing to write about.. Anyone that thinks, this is a good story, &amp;amp; enjoys reading it are Sick. getting someone drunk so you can fuck them - is Rape..

the guy in this story is a sad sick loser. - as are people in real life that do this...

a low life who can't get sex without doing that.. (kill yourself)

Again - in real life - I fail to understand anyone who can live with themselves after doing that... do they not have, a wife, girlfriend, female siblings, a mother, and other family members ? - - of cause this type of shit also happens to men.. it is not funny or enjoyable. - for the Victim

Being a female and that ignorant comment is sad....murder is illegal you think that is the same as consenual incest between adults? The issue people have is this is complete non consent and the incest is a side note....it should be in non consent.secrion that is all...also, total bullshit she would be coming like that drunk after losing her virginity..she would be sore as hell...and that pounding would not remotely feel good...and virgin does not have a closed vagina..he lied the entire time..pathetic...why would his wife be mad since she is fucking her brother...

This was clearly rape. Disgusting! I'm a female and I can tell this was clearly written by a male. Its absolutely disgusting.

So hot. I came here for rape and incest and got a very wet pussy, hard clit from it. More, please.

Pretty clear that the author hasn't a clue when it comes to a woman's body.

this was nothing but rape, plain and simple another desperate man has to get his niece drunk in order to get his way if she had stayed somber and it was her choice or you played strip poker and she lost, fine...this was rape disguised as making love

If you weren’t a fictitious character I would take your virgin backside , with a 90# jackhammer! Then every time you said , “please stop” , I’d say ,”but I’ve only taken a fourth of your lifeblood , so just another 3/4 and I’ll stop , I promise “ . Eventually you’d fall asleep forever and your poor niece will then be vindicated !

Maybe the story is in the wrong category but seriously if you're looking into incest it's already a little questionable let alone the non-consent category newsflash idiots non-consent equals rape potentially. Get over yourselves and go read a different story don't leave negative comments because you're a fucktard. To the author this was a pretty decent story clearly needs some work because there are certain things about the female anatomy apparently you don't understand what it was a great story I had a lovely cum :)

Nice story.

To all stupid retards who lament about "rape"...: It was NOT, but even if it was... So what, you stupid idiots?

It's fiction... Do you mean that every kind of crime should be censored from the fictional literature, just because you get...upset...!!!??

Stupid sissies of "political-correctness"...

What's creepy are the comments from people who seem to actually be having sex with their nieces. As a fantasy it's OK. But to do it in real life? Completely 1000% wrong.

Incest is fantasy, nuff said.

No offence that’s not how a vagina works, it’s not closed, you can’t tell visually or even with touch if someone is a virgin

That was most definitely rape🤷🏾‍♀️That girl was intoxicated and screamed telling him

To pull out he took advantage and kept going that shit is nasty and creepy asf

Humorus n kept me reading more n more

I loved to think that he raped her, especially after he made sure she was drunk. He was sweet to talk to her, but it would have been just as hot if he hadn't and had just shoved his cock into her tight cunt and shredded her. My Papa fucked me when my parents were married and then my step-dad and his friends did when my mom remarried. So these incest stories, and especially nc/r fucking soak my pussy.

I liked the story, but I actually found the anonymous comment from the woman who was fucked by her father and then later by her stepfather and his friends hotter!

Pretty poor story delivery...not up to standard. But keep trying, we all get better as time goes by.

a man trying to write a woman's dialogue and failing spectacularly. yikes.

Women don’t have a tamper evident seal on their pussies for fuck’s sake.

Is it necessary to break all barriers of morality to get attention from others?? Is it necessary to put inappropriate thoughts and ideas in readers' mind to get their fantasies fulfilled?? Please have some shame and morality. Dont be a wild animal and don't encourage others to be a wild animal with zero morality.

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I want my uncle to take my cherry…

I love this story I’ve read it multiple times and I rub my clit and get off to it every time. People saying how disgusting it is first off they knew what they were reading and read it anyways and I’m assuming it’s fictitious but really, it’s a hot story. Thanks for sharing

5 Stars

Naughty uncle fucking hs virgin niece is sexy.

I think the feeling of family cock inside you, any male relative inside you would be incredible. I've only ever experienced my brothers (with the help of a couple of their friends). Nothing can come close to the intensity of when their cock first touches you. But when his cock is filling you, its like you are home. Totally ecstasy, your cunt walls shiver trying to consume every part of him. I can only image how crazy my hole would be if daddy's cock was the one bringing me home.

You've got zero idea about anything to do with human anatomy, it's insane. This story was so hard to get through. Yikes

“Honey, i’m just touching them with my mouth” 🥵🥰

Loved it, and some of the coercion reminded me of another of my favourite stories on here...anyone who knows Uncle Vern knows what I'm talking about!

I wish I was straddled and taken by my Uncle (I’m 23F)

So basically he's a cuckold who literally just raped his niece 😂😂😂 what's next creampies