Uncle Fucks Drunk Niece

Pennsylvania drinking age

Is 21 not 18. She's legal to fuck, but not to drink. So, how could she have been begging you to "go out drinking with her"

Can't wait for next chapter

Loved the story!

Continue

Don't forget her cherry ass! Keep it up although I don't know how you're going to write off the whole pregnancy thing. Sounds risky.

WTF?

How is this just considered incest versus non-consent? I know it's just a story but how will he explain getting his own niece pregnant and the circumstances that led to it? Obviously he doesn't care about being found out.

You nasty lech!

The beginning read like a old dirty joke, but you finished off nicely. Your male characters are so demented, it's absolutely shameless. Keep writing, I'm curious to find out what your warped mind "cums" up with next.

hot

Hope she gets knocked up

A lot better this time

I trashed your first story dude. But this story was much better! You got rid if the insane exagerations (although some exageration is a good thing), and you were not so repetitive. You have potential.

Getting better. . . but

I read your first story and didn't say anything to trash it because despite all its problems it still managed to be pretty hot. And grammar and spelling wise, this one is much better, while still retaining the psychopathic kind of sexy thing you've got going on.
But there's one thing I can't take anymore. You apparently have no concept of female anatomy. Seriously, go do some research, google some *scientific* drawings, particularly about hymens. It's jarring and distracting.

not that hot

sorry but this story reads like a 18 year old put his wet dreams on paper. too much "she said, I said". that makes it really hard to actually get into the story. sounds more like porn commentary...

Note

Legal age to drink is 18 in some countries, legal age to have sex is also 16 in some countries eg: Australia.
So THINK or use your brain even slightly before you make a dumbass comment. Not every country follows the same laws fucking american dumb shit.

Anyway, back to the story, didn't like the whole blood thing, not all girls bleed, infact most don't.

Also didn't like the pregnant thing, almost ruined a good story. Also a few grammatical errors but not that many.

Kepp up the good work!

loved it

loved the story, was a bit stop and go but was fair hot. to the people commenting going off about legal ages in other countries he's obviously talking about america as they are going to an american basebal game so perhaps they should check their facts first hmmm? any ways, read a few of your stories and i'm a fan

sooo hot

Very nice story...

Marvolus,fantastic,

Enjoyed a lot and also did intercourse with my husband,he also did wide my ass hole,as he is also a permanent user of double dozes of Via- gra,so I am still
feeling great pain on both places,ashe without giving any rest kept on his riding on me.
Although the story is very good,however,its not fair for an Uncle to pop the
cheery of his nice,when she drunk.

Loved it!

You revealed a gorgeous scene. I cannot hardly wait for your ongoing chapters. YES! He got a belly on her, I just know it! Thank you

oh uncle jim

i love your detail
sure wish i was your niece - i'm wet and ready to cum just reading it.

mmmmm

I need an uncle like this.... play with me

Rape

You must be writing this from your prison cell. Because this is clearly rape.

yess

got my pussy wet....you can drop your cum load in me uncle!!!!

Rape

It's not hot when it's rape :/ This should be in the non-consent section, this was actually upsetting to read in places.

piece of bullcrap

who the hell yells out "DON'T POP MY CHERRY!" and "YOU TOOK MY VIRGINITY!" in the middle of intercourse?. and "I'm honored to take your cherry" ?? really? worst writing skills ever.

impossible anatomy

the hymen is at the entrance of the vagina. there's no sticking it in until you hit the hyen. Go rape an anatomy 101 book.

NICE

CONTINUE

WoW

thats b.s.

Wow... Worse writing ever

I can dig incest stories... But NOT rape stories... This was definitely a rape story... Please, stop writing, and take a hammer to your hands... Thanks!

Who is more stupid??

The hero of the story or the writer??? LOL
So let me get this, this guy fucks his niece, a big no no, AND he realy wants to have proof(probably to make things easier for police) and realy wants to make her pregnant, to hammer the nails in his coffin??ROFL

Something to say...

All the people out there should relize that this series seams to be an off shoot of the Aunt Lisa one you've got going. I could be wrong but the names are the same and so is the situation. If it is then what is here fits with what is there and its all good. Check it out.

5/5 and a fav

(^_^)

Blessed Be

UNCLE/NIECE

WELL I'LL REMEMBER KEVGOW AND NOT TO READ YOUR STORYS THERE NOTHING BUT IMMATURE RAPE STORY AND I HATE THAT ABUSE TO FEMALES
YOUR STORY THIS ONE IS ""SHIT"" ....................................R............. ........................

"Anonymous" cowards

If you have nothing positive to say, that's fine; you're entitled to your opinion and this is the place for opinions to be shared. BUT--the least you could do is own up to the fact that it's YOUR opinion!
Stop hiding behind being "anonymous" and sign in as a Literotica user. You put other people down but you are lazy (at best), wimpy cowards whom evidently don't want anyone to know they're reading perverted smut. (No offense meant, KEVGOW, i happen to like perverted smut, after all, isn't that why we're all here? ;-p )

When pathetic white racist have nothing else

they resort to the "n" word. For the rest of you, we'd take you more seriously if you weren't trying to take the moral high road from the incest section, you telling us we're sick/perverted for liking a story with a 'rape' scene is like an alcoholic looking down on a drug addict. The only one who buys your 'outrage' is YOU.

Bravo!

You really need to write a part 3. But just uncle and niece. Amazing

Ignore dumb fucks, keep writing

Nobody forced them to read. They are to stupid to know where the back space button is. Also simple fact they have no life there for bitch to seen important in their own deluded weak little world.

i've been cumming in my nece's pussy for the last 5 yrs since she turned 20.

I fucked my niece to and I loved it im still fucking her its been 5 years since I fucked her first I ain't fucked anybody but her since then I don't want to were so much in love I love the way my cock feels in my nieces pussy im trying to get her pregnant c

niece

my niece started out just sucking me off, then out of no where she begged me to fuck her she was 19 and i was 39. i have to say it was great that first time and got better with the next 20 to 30 times.now she lives with me again and i can't wait to fuck her more.

uncle Jim..

So did you post the video on the internet? I wanna watch it!!!

This is rape.

It needs to be in the non-consent category.

Yeah, agree with the last poster, definitely in the wrong category, lol! The 'fixed' bit was an interesting twist because Ive been thinking of a story with a similar twist, the guy being fixed but the girl not knowing and thinking she was getting knocked up. Heh. ...of course if this wasnt fantasy, she would prolly cut his balls off when she woke up sore and hung over in the morning, lol.

made me cum

I read this 2 times while jerking off and I came so fucking hard! Awesome awesome awesome!!!

Absolutely juvenile and not believable.

Name change

From what I can tell this is supposed to be the story of how jim fucked his niece from forcing aunt lisa but the author didn't bother to use the same name for the niece in both stories even though they referenced the story forcing aunt lisa just makes the writer look to lazy to even try to make the connection work

Liar - Liar

Pants on fire! Niece get the belly?

This was RAPE !!

Uncle Jim RAPED his niece !! What a liar ...I am fixed. , don't worry,you won't get pregnant!!

Idiots!

People here complaining about it being an actual rape story. Idiots the lot of you. You were fine enough to read the entire thing but then you call the author a Peado?

unc ballz deep

the lil whore was teasing the dick for a taste he should hav buttholefuckt her i wood

unc ;e swine

as soon as we got in the motel room i would have talked the teasing lil slut too burry her face in my asscracki and enjoy her licking my butthole yea thats right my butthole.

Really?

That was a RAPE.

Idiots

Idiots complaining about the rape in the story but yet your reading an incest category. You have a problem with rape but not incest, that there clearly shows you all complaining are incapable of good judgment.

KEVGOW- great story! Very much enjoyed it!