All Comments on 'But She's My Cousin Ch. 01'

by Smurfinforfun

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Loved it and Can't Wait for more

Bring on more of these adventures. I am eagerly awaiting it.

oldwayneoldwayneover 15 years ago
Outstanding tale!

I do hope you write more chapters. It was an outstanding bit of work so far. Give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
very hot

i related this story to my own fantasy. i got about a minute into it b4 i came

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Ch. 02????

part 2 please! =)

William smythWilliam smythover 14 years ago
More Please

Add my name to those insisting for MORE.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
not good

seemed rushed and unrealistic to me. once he found out how free she was with sex it seems he would have stepped back and slowed down especially if he had any feelings for her. as free as she was with sex it would make him think that there was no way he wanted to be near her because she would just drop him for the next guy she fancied. what happened in one day should have been spread out over months or years speed ruins a story theres no fire so build the plot and don't leave holes or jump ahead KEEP IT REALISTIC please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
bad comment

Just ignore the anom bad comment as it shows just how useless some people really are.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
but she's my cousin ch.01

I think you telling your story to fast. But its a very good tale just need a little more work

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not Incest

2nd or 3rd cousins don't count as incest; are not illegal anywhere. First cousins are sometimes considered incestuous, but in about half of the states it's perfectly legal. The "taboo" part is doing a blowjob in public that way. The lack of incest, however, doesn't detract from the sensuousness of your story!

Finger-meister

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I’m getting ready to fuck my cousin all weekend. She loves to suck cock and swallow cum

OseekerOseeker11 months ago

Cousin gives good head...

Lucky boy....

3 stars

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