All Comments on 'Denied Ch. 01'

Great start - please keep it coming.

A very good start, albiet somewhat short. Keep the story going!

Can't wait to hear the rest of the story... the delicious agony you describe sends chills down my spine. :-)

Please continue! Great premise, I would love to see how far she takes him.

Please, continue it...

It wasn't quite right.."I was thinking we could try it "...bit sloppy . There was other discordance. The story got better from: Take it out of the drawer.... she began to show assertive confidence. Male chastity allows a woman to acquire this confidence, which will be a benefit to her in many situations, in work and in dealing with men, socially. A woman is made more attractive this way, and enjoys life more, often at the expense of her delighted partner. There is nothing worse than dragging a doormat wife through life, for both parties. In the future she should regulate his weight by controlling the food coming into the house,and extra work and study for him-taking interest in him, and making sure that he soon begins to take her targets seriously ( because she now has a cane)

This is broken. Clearly an intro, and nicely teased, but where's chapter 2?

That would be my greatest fantasy