All Comments on 'Jane and the Mysterious Biker'

by sethp

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Fun Story!

Fun, different, light...like a secret fantasy.. I enjoyed it.

chargergirlchargergirlalmost 16 years ago
How dangerously fun!!

what girl doesn't dream about being whisked away by a handsome stranger? I loved it Seth, and thanks for the mention. ;) ~Cgirl *kiss*

Plainly_JanePlainly_Janealmost 16 years ago
Mmmmmmm good!

I laughed, I lusted, I pictured a sexy tattooed biker I used to know, and I thoroughly enjoyed your story! That was mmmm mmmm mmmmm good!! Thank you sweety!

darkstone57darkstone57almost 16 years ago
hey i just took a shower

and it wasn't a cold one, now i got to go do it again and turn up the air conditioning while i am at it. damn, that was hot...

J.DoeJ.Doealmost 16 years ago
Stupid

Very stupid.

janiexxjaniexxalmost 16 years ago
Mmmmmm...

I liked this very much! It reminds me in a way of my latest story, also inspired by someone I glimpsed briefly, but will always live in my memory.

A very exciting tale - I'm a fan of masturbation stories and this one satisfied completely!

janie xx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Gave up

I gave up after the first 3 or 4 paragraphs. Dumbest story I've read in a long time. In a real world he would be in jail so fast it would make your head spin.

the Ct.Yankee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Lame

If he's wearing leather from head to toe, how can she tell if he's heavily tattooed?

This story was very dull and I couldn't even bother to finish it.

litluvrlitluvralmost 16 years ago
Loved it..

I'm not one for super long stories, so any story that is short and written decently is my type of thing! Different, definitely. :)

KdDivaKdDivaabout 15 years ago
Harley Heaven

Wow... I can feel that hog vibrating between my thighs!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Total fantasy,but I like it. Well done

Three stars, you would have earned more if the tale had been longer.

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