All Comments on 'What You Were Thinking...'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Interesting Approach

Great description of breasts (unseen), and his feelings about them, but sorely missing seeing them naked and doing all the things to them one wants -- as a prelude.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sexy

I loved the entire thing. It was elegant and sensual.... also the very last line was perfect.

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