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Waiting For More
Really good start. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
If he can have anyone he wants...
where is the challenge? Forcing someone to want you is not the same as them wanting you. Might as well be writing about sex with a pocket pussy....only not as erotic.
Control Issues Much?
Wouldn't be cool, if I could do anything I wanted? Charlie X anyone?
more,more....
hopefully you will have him stay at their house, using the wife in ways hubby never has,,making im watch as his wife is turned into a cum dump for the kid. and makinghubby watch,clean up etc....
More stories like This!
More ,More,More Great Job Whith this one so far
Keep Going And Do more stories just Like This!
Just keep Writing!
Keep writing More just like this! Dont let anyone tell you your stories are bad. this type is refreshing
So keep writing more with themes just like this
Great job!
Simply Brilliant!
You did well! I just love your vocabulary choice! And the descriptions are just orgasmic! Every scene is perfectly clear in my mind! You are bloody brilliant! You could write those awesome paper back erotica! I applaud you!
Hot!
This was a great story, I loved the concept. Hope there will be more chapters to come!
great story
please dont stop it is so hot, please right another chapter
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