Haunted House

excellent story, the lucky guy

This was such a fun and lively story as I have read in a long time. By all means write the next part, does he have another visit from her or a new girl.. perhaps she'll stay with him forever??? time will only tell :).

Superb!

Marvelous, fine writing, great read! Thank you! More?

Beautifully written

But then again, I'd expect nothing else coming from you. Very interesting story, I'm looking forward to more.

Brill

I thought it was brilliant just brilliant.
Would love to read more.

Great!

This was a great story!

Outstanding!

This is a great story, I'd really like to read more! Another excellent story by one of the most talented authors on the site!!

More!

Keep that shit going!

i love ur story pleaze keep going

I loved ur story pleaze keep going. I would love to read more. please keep writing and ill always leave u good comments. ^_^

by: cat
p.s: i love ya

Please....

Write a sequel, this story has the potential to become a very good novela or even just a small series of erotic stories.
S.N.

awesome.

Please is it posible for you to continue this? It has some damn fine writing.

more

great story want more :-)

PLEASE!!!

DO MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOUR AN AWESOME AUTHOR!!!!!!!
CONTINUE! PLEASE!!! :D

Yes, please!

Write more! That was interesting, yet very erotic! Great work :)

great story

story held me from the beginning,not the same crap,i felt for her,has the beginng of a great story platform,dependons on were you take it...

Good start. I'd like to see more, please.

More!!!

Absolutely amazing please write more!!

Definitely more! Who is this delicious morsel?

Are you kidding?!

In the sixties there was a popular song about a guy who spent the night in a haunted house. One of the lines was, "Ain't no haint (sp?) gonna run me off!" I feel the same way about this story. This one, like just about all of your other submissions, is simply awesome! I am continually amazed at your imagination and your story telling is great. If you don't write the next chapter, I will come find you and make a "haint" out of you!! (I'm just kidding, of course.) But I do anticipate the next chapter. JohnT

good story, but...

there are a lot of grammatical errors you should check before submitting and what does this mean "reading to kiss his ghost girl " you wrote it, now explain it?