Taken by Husband's Best Friend

who wrote this

The idea of the story was gopod. You need to check the grammar and spelling and use complete sentences. I am not a teacher but I would think a freshman in high school wrote this

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If this really happend why are you married?

why people shouldn't marry young

marriage isn't for all people, but def. not for people too young to drink. This is a good example of why.

hot

give her a break geeze ya think you all wrote perfect your first few stories and none of you ever looked at another man and woman and thougt about it you dont like it dont read it

Arrousing,

Not a bad story. A lttle on the short side but none the less, it was arrousing. As far as a young wife fooling aound behind her hubby's back, It was just one of those things.

Why?

She says that she couldn't control herself, so why not? What was preventing her from remaining faithful to her husband? The plot is fine, the story sucks though.

nice story

Why do so many assume these stories are true? This gal's motivation was the fact she was horny. If she had remained faithful to her hubby it would have been a BORING story. I look for entertainment, not social commentary. It could have used a little polish here and there but the basic theme was good. Comments about marrying young etc, etc, are beyond stupid. If you dislike stories like this one then stay away from the "Loving Wives" section totally. Most of the time the loving wives are screwing guys who aren't their husbands. Surprise, right?

Even if it's true.....

Why should I care about what the puritan moralists think.

it blows

i thought it sucked totally.
im just glad it was so short. the author spared us

Forbidden fruit

Tastes even sweeter!

Well done...

THanks!

3 stars

Who cares whether it really happened. It could have happened. It happened to other people, it happened to some of us who posted public comments. I feel the story should be a bit longer so it can describe the growing attraction and the point of no return.

Making of a slut wife

Interesting that her committment to her husband or her marriage vows or to her marriage never came up in this "sex story". But of course reality and further definition of the characters involved in this lust fuck would so complicate a jack off story. Total lack of remorse on her part tells it all, some men believe that most women when taken sexually whether married, engaged or they have a boyfriend are totally susceptible to this frontal assault. They also believe the sex would be better than for their normanl lives. They also believe tht once a women is taken like this she would further allow herself to be dominated by the predator male. If all this bull shit were even the slightest bit accuarate, the successful married rate would not have been over 50% since the 60's until present tme. If the bs described were true most men would be sexual predators which again is far from the truth. If all it took to dominate a woman was to fuck her aggressively we would be back in the stone age. Even at that time there is no evidence that women stayed with the men who fucked them. What is most likely is that they grouped around each other and the men came and went.

I recommend cmsix Time Travel to 40000 years ago stories on SOL storiesonline.net

@ Anon The Antropologist found to investigate the remained stone aged nations in the World, the dominant life is the stable 1 man 1 woman pair connection. I think this was in the past from 75000 years to 10000 years. The exception was the big meetings (yearly, more yearly) when the more hunter gathering groups met and the ocasion was for good oportunity to look for oposite sex mate (wedding) from another group or or "extramarital sex"................The paleolite groups struggles against the nature and "marital" conflicts could decrease the capable to survive, but the inbreed decreased the descedens biological surviving capable. The family life was between the Scilla (marital conflicts) and Charubdis (inbreed). The death could arrive from accident (too strong mamooth, lions, wolves, etc..), because majorite of the plagues arrived with the neolit and the half orphans (orphans) had to bring up so the poligamy was the instrument to bring up the youth to SURVIVE in the paleolit nature.................So a man or a woman had to know he or she MUST ASSIST TO BRING UP NOT BIOLOGICAL RELATIVE CHILDREN FOR SURVIVING THE PALEOLIT HOMO SAPIENS SAPIENS SMALL HUNTER-FISHING- GATHERING GROUPS AGAINST THE NATURE. If Somebody wants to know the paleolit life (with Time Travel) in good erotic Sci Fi, I recommend on SOL (storiesonline.net), cmsix's 40000 years ago stories. Cmsix did 1 mistake, he did not know the paleolit women breastfeed her children until 3-4 years old, the high prolactin level was old antiovulation practice. A hunting-fishing-gathering group could save limited babies, the older children could go with the group and plagues WERE NOT...................

Wow..

...incredible. It takes a lot of - practice - I guess to have the nerv to stop inmidst of something that might someday be called a story.

Two corrections

First this is not her husbands friend he is more like his 2nd worst nightmare. She is not a wife but a mill wheel around his neck and she is his worst nightmare.

Realistic

Realisic, erotic, believable...
The wife is a keeper!
She will make both of them happy.
She is only 21, she will fuck another friend of her husband's or of her own once in a blue moon for as long as she is fuckable.
As i said, she is a keeper.
(****)

5 stars

The story is a nice read. Gives you the tent. I am 60+ but if i were 30 years younger i would fuck the 21 year old wife the moment i get the chance.
The wife is still young but she will be a good mother and a good wife. She will have sex with other men but not often.

So young...

So young and already a cheating wife. Why did she marry so young?

I feel sorry for the young wife. She only has one breast, not two like most wives. That is her problem, she is deformed she has doubts of her attractiveness. That is why she whores around.

About (a) this story AND (b & c) comments submitted on 07/03/14

(a) The story is very erotic. I love the fact it was written from the young wife's POV! The author did not go into details but a reader could realize the friend and the wife had been exchanging eye contact an ogling each other's bodies. The opportunity knocked when the husbabd got wasted. He pined her from behind to the kitchen cabinets & started kissing the back of her her neck. When tension grows passed of ooint of no return, a move like that is worth a thousand words. There is nothing much to discuss, it's a yes or a no. He knew she was on the same page.

(b) [BTW the profile of impo_58 is banned.] His (her) comment was totally out to lunch. "so young & already a cheating wife." I believe she is 21. Should she wait to be 60? Some women start cheating at 20, some at around 40, some never do it.

(c) As to firemanlit's comment, i have to admit i did not get the humor in his comment. [Both him & me are in the attached male 60+ category.]
Many, many years ago when my 1st wife was 21, i occasionally got drunk in bars with buddies & would come home very late & drunk as a lord. My dad, who was a man of few words, told me: "You do not spend nights in bars if you have a young wife at home. It's a No-No! You just don't do it." I kept going bar hopping with my buddies and my young wife started cheating on me. She fell in love with her 3rd lover & left me. (I found out about the lovers post festum.)

The story is EROTIC! The 21-year-old wife is adventurous. she loves sex. Her husband must quit drinking called turkey.

IF I WERE HER HUSBAND I WOULD NOT LEAVE HER OVER ONE FLING. IT SEEMS THAT HER LIBIDO IS VERY STRONG, WHICH IS IMPORTANT.

IN MY MIND IT SHOULD NOT BE CONSIDERED INFIDELITY IF A WIFE HAS SEX WITH HER HUSBAND'S BEST FRIEND. IT IS BETTER FOR THE FAMILY IF TWO MEN DO ERRANDS AND CARE ABOUT STUFF.

You probably think i an joking but i am not!

☆☆☆☆

:)

I like the story very much (a perfect jack-off fantasy and totally realistic). Rating: *****- (5-).

:)

OMG! SHE IS UNFAITHFUL. SHE HAS HAD THE HOTS FOR HER HUSBAND'S BEST BUDDY ALL ALONG & FUCKS HIM WHEN SHE HAD A CHANCE. SHAME ON HER! WITH A WOMAN LIKE HER...

... you are either in 7th Heaven or on cloud number 9! Never a dull moment.
I wish i were her husband. I know i would fall in love with her because i have a very pronounced voyeur/cuck-wannabee side.

:-)

4*

****+ (4+)

Perfect jack-off fantasy.
A good piece of softcore-porn literary ficton.
We the readers must imply what motivated the wife and the friend.
When a woman has the hots for a man and decides to sleep with him if she has an opirtunity, she will signal that to him.

please proof read

OMG, loved the story but was hard to follow with all of the spelling errors and incorrect words used........PLEASE proof read your story before hitting the enter button.

Very nice and short

Nice and short...I loved it

Basic english.

Take a course in basic english.your writing are so poor that I quit after a half page.