Beast of Rage Ch. 02

Not bad but

you should find one tense you like writing in and stick to it. The jumping back and forth is a bit jarring.

still hooked

great, and getting better. i think the first chapter was smoother, in both the tenses and activity, but its enthralling. I'm looking forward to chapter 3, i just hope it won't be months before we see it...

i'm hooked

please come back again soon and add more LOTS more chapters would love to see where you go with this.. great story so far..

Come on, where's more?

I think he's possessive and she's complex, very good characters to build on, I wanna know where you're going with it, why he's so captivated by her and needed to capture her. How does he gain her forgiveness. plz write another chapter!

Continuation???

is there going to be anymore? Really started to get into the characters

still waiting

Please keep going with this story!

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