by zappbranigan
I can't believe the previously written comment of "badly written"! This story was, in my mind, well written and damn hot.
I writhed, I moaned, I came!
Hope one negative comment does not stop this new contributor writing more for us. Personally, I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing this with us,
Cyn xx
I loved it. Damn well writtn and oh so hot and erotic!! There's nothing hotter than two girls , .... unless it is more than two! But I love girls that are willing to try new things and share with others too!
Good story!! Keep up the good work!!
i thought it was well written, and wanted to be right there with the 3 of them... i truly feel sorry for the idiot that didn't enjoy the story, and maybe he/she needs to find other stories elsewhere.... please keep up the good work, i know i look forward to more erotic stories from you...
This was a very well done story and if "very very badly written" didnt like it then he or she needs to get a life...... Everyone else really liked it.... Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!
Wife & hubby mix it up with her BFF, sounds like a long time, occasional get together great option for all 3's happiness. Good story line and writing!
BRAVO!!!
He discovered his wife anal lust and fucked her friend after they caught him masturbating, Fast action full of erotic fucking