All Comments on 'Runner Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
NOT YOUR USUAL

l think this story needs to end quickly, its not up to your usual excellance...no hard feeling, just finish it and give us your usual best...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
you still got it

i think it has potential! keep working on it though...it's starting off too slow :)

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 16 years ago
Creepy

Very well written but very dark and creepy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
hmm

i loved it! something new hope u have tons more for us!!

Inky_DarknessInky_Darknessalmost 16 years ago
Mmmmm better!

Well, the faintly nauseous feeling the previous chapter gave me is gone! yay! (I'm a lucky, girl, blood and guts don't upset me... just messed up emotions... hmmm). Story doesn't seem to have your usual depth though, but then, as you said, its only a short story, so expecting too much depth would be unreasonable.

Otherwise, good story, good characters (I love that Detective... I'm a sucker for the mushed good looking man with a heart) and now I'm off to read the new Unusual chapter hehe

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Radically different

The ONLY thing this story has in common with your usual story is the high quality. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
You are amazing!

Love your Hunter stories and you're still able to create more interesting characters and stories! Super, super, super! Thank you for writing and posting often.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
cool

way cool. i liked it a lot ;)

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 16 years ago
This chapter is better...

I'm glad we're getting some characters we can relate to..although I still would like to know why the doctor is the way he is. I'll keep reading :)

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Hey: I'm sorry about chapter two of Captive Angel being posted before chapter one. There was a paragraph or two that needed editing and I turned it back in to those who run this place. It should be out soon. Also. If there are any of my books you would like reported just tell...

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