by Daniellekitten
l think this story needs to end quickly, its not up to your usual excellance...no hard feeling, just finish it and give us your usual best...
i think it has potential! keep working on it though...it's starting off too slow :)
Well, the faintly nauseous feeling the previous chapter gave me is gone! yay! (I'm a lucky, girl, blood and guts don't upset me... just messed up emotions... hmmm). Story doesn't seem to have your usual depth though, but then, as you said, its only a short story, so expecting too much depth would be unreasonable.
Otherwise, good story, good characters (I love that Detective... I'm a sucker for the mushed good looking man with a heart) and now I'm off to read the new Unusual chapter hehe
The ONLY thing this story has in common with your usual story is the high quality. Keep it up!
Love your Hunter stories and you're still able to create more interesting characters and stories! Super, super, super! Thank you for writing and posting often.
I'm glad we're getting some characters we can relate to..although I still would like to know why the doctor is the way he is. I'll keep reading :)