All Comments on 'Worlds Colliding Ch. 01'

I can't find the "Roman Holiday" story, which you say should come first.

I posted the sequel and forgot to post the original. What a DOPE!. I'll take care of that right away!

I'll post it here, but Roman Holiday can be found at www.mcstories.com as well.

I'm hooked, need to read the preceding!

I've read many stories, yet of all of them this series of yours beginning with 'Women Health Issues 101' and culminating with 'Worlds Colliding' (excluding 'Roman Holiday' since it wasn't found or read yet) is enthralling, enticing, exciting and a real imagination-capturing romance/mystery short story with solid, intertwined plots, clearly defined characters including heroines and a superbly connected story line. Absolutely loved it and enjoyed the story so much that I often would quickly scan over the sex sequences just to continue on with your tale told with excellent detail and imagery. I love eroticism as much as anybody, but I truly love a wonderful story...told by an equally wonderful story-teller! Thanks for your talented effort!

alliekat@longlines.com