All Comments on 'Uncle Fucks Drunk Niece Ch. 02'

by KEVGOW

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
loved it

cant wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
What a dumbass story

Seriously, I wanted to like it, but the dialogue sounds like a 50 yr old fucking a 14yr old girl.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
LUCKY MAN

JUST TO FUCK MY NIECE ONE TIME IN HER HOT LITTLE TEENAGE CUNT

AND EAT HER SWEET CUM OH MY MY MY

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
so hot

when a you gonna tell us he knocked her up?

I want to see how she reacts

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Need the next chapter...

We need another chapter that shows what happens when she finds she is pregnant from her "fixed" uncle!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More chapters soon

50yr fucking a 14yr old niece dialogue I dont think so but if it is then good and great. What more taboo than that!!!! Underage and incest to boot!!!! Yummy. God it was great and keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
proof read dummy

way to change her name from beth to alison... pay more attention to your writting.... it sucks to read two chapters in a row that really don't seem linked with different names...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
the other virgin hole

cant' wait to see her struggle to take it in the ass..

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
lame

wow. how repetitive can you be? and not even the same name. i was hoping this would be better than the first chapter, but it was just another let down. hopefully you can do better in the next chapter. i'm skeptical though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
yeahhhh

wow i think this made me wet =]]] well wow i cant wait until the next one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Fuck Yes!!!

Im soakin wet from both of these.... cant wait untill the next!!!!

sexgal1966sexgal1966almost 14 years ago
OMG

I never came so hard or so much.........cant wait to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
names

be careful to your writing how comes the names become different after goin to the next chapter. but i like the story it so interesting im wet and i cant wait another

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice story

When's part 3 cuming?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Stupid story

realy stupid story, with a jackass hero and totaly unbelievable heroine, seriously, bad writing can't be justified by saying it's just a fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Fucking fantasy

You said that your nieces name was Beth in the first one you liar

solvsupersolvsuperover 12 years ago
Beth or Allison, which is it?

Keeping the name the same from part 1 to part 2 might be a good idea. Apart from that, I would really like to read furter installments!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
this sucked

really you need to do some editing.. a lot editing.

maybe your story turns some people on, but there are hundreds stories like this on this site. what qualifies a good story is not only an imaginative plot (whether yours is imaginative lies in the eye of the reader, I won't judge), but also the style. Your writing style really sucks. And who talks like that? Have you ever had sex?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yo

Hey. I ain't a hater and all the others out thre can shut up. Her name could be Beth and he calls her allison. IT DOESN'T MATTER. It's an exelnt story, got me hard, and I want number three

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I give up

This writer is probably the most clueless i have ever encountered, not only he knows nothing about female anatomy apart from some stories he have read, he knows nothing about pills like viagra, dude seriously, viagra does not kick in after a few hours, ROFL

You should probably try to get laid a couple of times before trying to write erotica, or at least do some reserach

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please

Don't bother continuing. This is godawful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
BOOOOOOOO

WELL YOU CAN GIVE UP WRITING THIS WAS DUMB AND NOT WORTH WHILE READING EVERY TIME I SEE YOUR NAME ''KEVGOW'' I AM GOING TO PASS YOU BY THIS WAS A STUPID RAPE STORY NOT EVEN A STORY JUST A BUNCH OF WORDS YOU FOUND TO PUT DOWN ON PAPER GET SOME GLASSES I GIVE YOU 0 STARS FOR YOUR TIME IN WHICH YOU WASTED IT..................''R''................................

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Part three

I personally would like to read part three. Please make it!

anallover1774anallover1774about 12 years ago
Nice story

Don't listen to anyone else. Keep writing I liked this story. Ass time baby.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
DISGUSTING !!! And just that.Grow a proper personality before continue writing.

Well, I wouldn't tell that struggling with words 'writing' in reality - this world would feel better if you'd concentrate on reading.

You earned a top ten rating on my personal list of disgust.

valeto9valeto9almost 12 years ago
i dont know wat everyones problem is

I love this story and am looking forward to part 3

Mainman12Mainman12almost 12 years ago
Your a rapist

This young lady didn't consent to have sex with you but still carried despite cries for you stop. That make you nothing more than a rapist I hope your reading this jail where you belong.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
stuff like this turn me on

I really like it. Plus it's just a fantasy guys, don't get too emotional about it. Now go read something that's to your preference. We have tags for a reason :P

On a side note, I love the story :)

mataratamatarataalmost 12 years ago
simply Amazing

Do a part three already!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Part three? Maybe...

I'd only like to see a part three if the Girl finds out she's pregnant and bashes the asshole's head in with a baseball bat. Erotic in the sex scenes, but fairly much garbage in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
STORY

Well its a "STORY" of imagination and fiction....for sure,,,,,,,,,,,,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
names?

Wasn't the girl's name beth in the first story? Not Allison.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

i started nailing my niece when she turned 20 that's been 14 yrs now....no kids yet,but alot of love making.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Uncles toy

My Uncle got me drunk at 13 and fucked me. He still uses me 6 years later and he always forces me to take his cum in my pussy. He waits till I'm sleeping then comes in my room and plays with my pussy until I wake up wet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Names

The niece's name was Beth now it's Allison?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
this is terrible

Your literary skills are poor in form and execution,

Have you ever read a real book THAT USES ALL CAPS to put forth the idea that a person is yelling? No? Me either. Learn how to narrate.

And try and follow your own bloody story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
let's fuck

Anybody in CA that wants to fuck (;

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
by

Now i want to know ur name

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Allison or Beth

The first story the girls name was Beth. Now it's changed to Allison.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Alison...

I thought her name was Beth. I'm confused. o.0

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more

Next chapter

NotquietNotquietover 8 years ago
More

Tell us how you continue to take her after you return home. Please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

The guy lives in his fantasy world, lol. "Now shes a slut for my cock" as she gets on his dick so he can cum in her after he basically told her he was going to rape her ass if she didnt. Rofl.

Sort of interesting story but it could be written better with her character being turned in a smoother fashion.

thebug37thebug37almost 8 years ago
Two Cherries Down

One cherry to go - gotta get that brown cherry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Name change

In the first her name is beth now is Allison

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
i hated it

I already didn't like the first one, but now, I hate it. It's disgusting how he came in her... Bad writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Bad writeing...

The fact her name changef between part 1 and 2....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
great

Loved both stories. can't wait to see part 3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Kind of hot

I actually kind of liked it. I’m hoping he just blurts out that he lied and came in her “because I just couldn’t help myself”. I’d love to hear her reaction. This story is under the non-consent/reluctance category for a reason people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I knocked up my niece 4 yrs ago we have a beautiful daughter ,were working on our second

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lovely!!

I liked it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Name change?

Why did her name change?

SynnermanSynnermanover 5 years ago
What's in a name?

IT must be nice to start out raping Beth and end up with Allison. Personally I would get them both together. What a night that would be, brings back some fond memories.

Not withstanding the name change I did enjoy the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
calm down before you fall down...

first off to all those who feel the need to bash the story and its writer, YOU read the story right? YOU clicked on the "Non-consent/rape" link.

No one really cares if you think its disgusting, its someones imagination on paper and personally stfu and keep scrolling, well written, no. But it's overall sexual feel is great, and most people that have a vast sex life admit they've at some point had what most people call "unhealthy sexual attraction" to a family member. Hell Ive heard of adopted children having a sexual attraction to their birth parents.

end of story..either shut up or do something more useful with your mouth...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Retard

is the woman in this story a Retard, - he rapes her & later on she then enjoys it..

BullS... my uncle raped my sister, she sure as hell did not consent or enjoyed it..

the scumbag later tried to rape another niece, plus he forced sex on his daughter & her young child.. The scumbag did get prison for the daughter & gran daughter rape.... the world has some real sick -Sick men in it. - all of them should be killed, prison is not good enough

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Looking for chapter 3

Looking for chapter 3. What happens next ? Does he keep using her ? What happens when they get home ?? What about the aunt, does she join in ? Does she get pregnant ?

Akirababe87Akirababe87over 3 years ago

I like the concept and the story and the sex, but the dialogue is really clunky and forced. Nobody talks like that. And the caps are seriously excessive and annoying.

And I'll never understand why people read noncon stories and bitch about them being noncon. Try a different genre then, people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Stupid

That girl is too stupid she needs to get the morning after pill so her and her asshole husband don’t throw a monkey wrench into the gene pool , it’s already pretty polluted it seems !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice. I liked it. Waiting the 3rd part. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Hot story !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Update please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very contradicting statement over there.

He said, "You're going to be a great cocksucker and GUYS love that."

Then his inner voice was, "She was MINE and I was going to take her as much as possible."

Western culture. smh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Where is part 3 ?? It was just getting good. Does she get pregnant ? Does that aunt join in when they get home ??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fucking her is ok but why make her pregnant.just make a relationship and let them enjoy life as lover but without including pregnancy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

dudes a piece of shit

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You changed her name from Beth to Allison??

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Fuck thats hot the little slut fucking loved it

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Why this fetish about pregnancy, after being forced?

She lives with mom and dad, if she ends up pregnant, how will she explain to her parents? Uncle didn't know what to do so he fucked me instead, and i liked it?

Stupid!

DNA!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Please do not continue story is over: Uncle fucks niece and she likes it.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Name change Beth to Allison why? (Same comment as Anonymous 6 months ago). I like Aunt/Uncle --- Nephew/Niece consensual incest fantasies. This story is rape violence. Rewrite this into a uncle/niece consensual erotica type of story.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

It was absolutely great can't wait till part three comes out

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Trash.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

BEST STORY ON LIROTICA

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

It's really fucked up. Just if you wanna improve the story: make it more descriptive. Use all the senses. It is a decently written story but there is a lot that the reader has to fill in for themselves.

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