All Comments on 'Master's Shower'

Cute story. However, when writing, I needs to be capitalized...YOU and YOUR do NOT unless they are the first word in a sentence! And do you realize that in this very short story you used the word "slowly" 7 times? Has some possibilities but needs a good editor.

Bobosssweetnessfreak obviously has lnever heard of M/s protocol. It is very common for the Master to have capitals in reference to him and the slave to have even their Is lowercase.

I personally don't like the capitalization protocol and find it incredibly distracting.