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AngelineAngelinealmost 16 years ago
Your Poem

has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

(Should that "Where" be "Were"? Looks like maybe it should--but either way, it's lovely Annie)

AnschulAnschulalmost 16 years ago
UYS, you're a dream

Don't tell us anymore that you can't write poetry. Au Contraire!! This is absolutely beautiful, a bit sad and wistful, but it moved me. Really moved me. See my today's 30/30.

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
A tug at my heart

It pulled hard at my heart; I won't discuss it. Wonderfully done (meaning so effective without being overdone.)Enough said.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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Poignant dreams shown and powerful wishes witnessed here.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 16 years ago
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You should definitely write more of this kind of poetry -- wistful and lovely.

annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 15 years ago
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Wah! This is beautiful, my heart aches!

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