I liked what I read, but you could have built it up a little slower, a slow seduction is the best (even if it's an unwilling seduction). Also, more detail in the sex scenes.
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Anonymous10/30/08
i sent my dad this story
fuckin hotttt!!!! thanks for the great story
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Anonymous01/27/11
amazing
I loveeed this story
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Anonymous02/25/15
Totally pathetic, just shove this crap off in the fucking rape section, because thats where it belongs.
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Double your pleasure
Daddy seems to have it made. The only bad thing will be the medical Bills.
Better Than DoubleMint Gum!
Double the pleasure; double the fun, indeed!
more please sir
not so great on plot, realism or style, but you sure know how to write smut!!!!
surely these folks don't stop here?
OK, but brief
I liked what I read, but you could have built it up a little slower, a slow seduction is the best (even if it's an unwilling seduction). Also, more detail in the sex scenes.
i sent my dad this story
fuckin hotttt!!!! thanks for the great story
amazing
I loveeed this story
Totally pathetic, just shove this crap off in the fucking rape section, because thats where it belongs.
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