All Comments on 'Mom's Game of Dares'

There must be a part two. They meet in real life.

More erotic than two mothers and their sons meeting up for a swap session.

One of the hottest stories i've read on this site. might not have been the best in strict writing sense, it was still absolutely amazing.

I GET SO TIRED OF READING STORIES WHERE THE RECIPRIENTS ARE GOING AT IT LIKE RABBITS WITHIN A PARAGRAPH OF THE BEGINNING.

Waiting for part two with baited breath.........

Very well written. Great characters and storyline.

One of the hottest stories i've read on this site, it was absolutely amazing.

definetly continue this story..with donna/carmen/john/shane all getting together...and not only donna/carmen getting into bi..but john/toby sucking each other's ballmilk out of their mom's pussies...and the sons getting into more bi with donna and carmen daring them each step...and moms' pussies and butts as their reward...

A nicely written story with a slight twist to get things started. I've had a lot of fun myself on the internet, but the advent of the camera prevents the three hundred pound, sweaty, bald man from being the hot little mom of a teen age boy.haha I do hope you will continue this. The two couples do need to experience each other and then sway with each other. Thanks for a length that allowed me to jack off along with your characters.

Definatly a new twist - jumped into the sons a little fast, but definatly get them together so they can ALL suck each other.

super story wish it was non fiction. I need to write a part 4 soon to mine one and only.

Good, good good!

One of the hottest stories i've read on this site, it was absolutely amazing.

This story has everything and this story must continue, I hope the sequel can measure up, because this was one of the best I have ever read in this genre, and I've read alot!

That was AMAZING!

Carmen, Donna and their sons - a very hot foursome in the making. I hope there are a few more chapters on this story. Very hot and stimulating.

The kind of story i go to this site for!

HOT!! HOT!!! HOT!!!!

This had a great set-up - the two mothers coming to the realization that their sons lusted after them, and the slow build-up of teasing them. Very hot and sexy. As I read it I thought "wow, how is this going to end? I hope the author doesn't ruin it by having the two mothers have sex with their sons at the same time in front of each other via webcam." And sure enough, that's how it ended. Everything up to that point was well-written, that ending just seemed phoned in and predictable - with the great build-up it deserved a much better pay-off. I would have much rather the main character had sex with her son without the webcam, and then talk to her friend about it. Still, for a predictable (and out of character) ending it was still hot. Just wish it had ended as good as it started.

it started as a 100 and ended as a 75, so not bad.

This is further proof of how amazing you are! Wow! The end? No way! You can't leave the people who now love you in their needy state! ;)

Please say that this is the first of many new recruits into the teasing slutty world that you created! Maybe they can teach other new generations and/or reach out to other mothers needing their brave example! Please! Please, press on and always wit the style and flair we have come to enjoy! I loved your stories with the I-room and just can't help but wonder what a support group like these fine ladies could accomplish with such fine writing skills behind them! Hoping that these words fall on receptive ears!

Newtype

This is further proof of how amazing you are! Wow! The end? No way! You can't leave the people who now love you in their needy state! ;)

Please say that this is the first of many new recruits into the teasing slutty world that you created! Maybe they can teach other new generations and/or reach out to other mothers needing their brave example! Please! Please, press on and always wit the style and flair we have come to enjoy! I loved your stories with the I-room and just can't help but wonder what a support group like these fine ladies could accomplish with such fine writing skills behind them! Hoping that these words fall on receptive ears!

Newtype

I have read many stories on this site and this is one of the best I have ever read, please carry on and tell how they all get together for some of the hottest sex ever.

Yoy are an exceptional writer, please keep up the great writing .

THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY.

Interesting structure to the story. I like the tension created by each mom character upping the ante on the dares each go round. Some of the dialogue didn't ring true for me as in a few expressions like- "Do you like my cunt, son?"

Other than that, it was well written, creative, and hot incest sex with a touch of lesbianism thrown in for good measure. I'd enjoy the "meeting" chapter sequel.

Tunner

One of the best I've read. I'll be looking for the next part of this great story.

Very good idea and development! Loved the progression and the manner in which the solution was achieved. You have a real talent for engaging the reader. Keep it up. I plan on reading all of your submissions.

I enjoyed the natural progression of the story - a long, stimulating foreplay - from beginning to end.

Great buildup...had me oozing precum for 20 minutes...gotta go take care of things...

great story ... never ralised it was too long but you kept the interest as well as the heat

kudos for that

great job done mate

Great story. Please do more.

How about a lesbian version ? (Mom and daughter)

Thank you for your time.

E.

USA

I have been a literotica fan since a long time now...yours has been the singlemost story that I relished so much ... Keep up the good work!

This was yr first story that I read.. but I will read all of them during the next few weeks ... great job!

It felt as if u WERE the mother and felt everything as it transpired... Amazing writing skills!

That you are the King of this genre. Absolutely superb story.

In this excellent story the action starts with Donna and Carmen, divorced mothers of 18 year old sons, Shane and John, tall, handsome, and very well built! The Moms’ cunts ooze whenever their sons are present and they decide to unleash the lads’ natural motherfucking instincts! They keep upping the ante on revealing attire and sexy talk, exciting their sons more and more! They note the big bulges under their boys’ flies and the cum stains they find in their bedrooms! The two mothers are obsessed with their sons’ big dicks, and happy that Shane and John sport practically constant hard ons around their mothers! When Carmen models a bikini swimsuit for her son, revealing her ass, tits, and most of her motherly twat, John just stares and creams his jeans! His Mom loves the sight of her boy’s spreading cum stain! The game of dares on the mothers’ computers is meant to make their sons into lusty young motherfuckers, and it works! The boys achieve every son’s deepest wish, when they finger fuck their mothers’ sopping wet fuckholes, ease their big dicks into their Moms’ hungering twats, and blow their balls up the same cunts they came out of!

There are hundreds of stories of motherfucking on Literotica and I've sampled a great many of them. In my opinion, this is the very best! The excitement builds as two Moms reveal to each other their growing passion for their tall, good-looking sons, especially what the boys are carrying between their legs! Carmen, John's Mom, tells her friend, I've got to see what's making that big bulge in his pants! Donna feels the same way about her boy Shane. The mothers become more and more flirtatious with their sons, giving them glimpses of their tits and even their motherly twats. Like all young males, the boys have an inborn attraction to their mothers' cunts, and soon the lads are hard whenever they're around their Mom. Of course, the mothers notice this and it makes their twats leak like a faucet! Carmen finally tells her friend, We're going to make our sons motherfuckers! The boys are ready, willing, and VERY able to be just that! The first time John slips his hand down his Mom's panties and handles her twat he reports, She's all kinds of wet! When the mothers finally see their sons' big stiff dicks for the first time, they're stunned. Then each son achieves every boy's deepest dream, as he pushes his supersized prick up his mother's tight twat and blow his balls up his own birth canal! It'll be motherfucking heaven from now on!

That was the HOTTTest motherfucking story I have ever read! I really want to read the next installment! WOW.

I love the anticipation and tease. Thank you!

not your normal style but you did very well with it. Can we see a part 2 and 3 PLEASE.

Outstanding!

wow really sexy storie, some titfuck would be great

Great concept, pulled of very nicely, and left me wanting more! What could be better for a writer?

I loved your story! It was very hot! I would love to read about all of them getting together! I would especially love parts about the moms together! Please continue this story! Another chapter would be great! Keep up the great work!

I loved this story! It was one of the best I've read on the site here and I just loved it. I cant believe I have never come accross your stories before (or maybe I have, i didnt look real close at your list yet). But i loved the build up...my favorite way to do a story. The jump in types usually are lame. Keep up the good work!

Ohhh my tight pussys wet now I want a john in me but my pink didlos going to have to do I'm on the vergebof a orgasm ( 5 minutes please )

Yes that was awsome thanks xx

OMG my pussy is driping wet!

THis story had me cuming way too quickly!!

I don't think I've ever cum this hard just to a story.... Amazingly written good job!!!!!

What an amazing story. I have never been this hard or came this much reading a story or chatting.

Thank you

can anybody tell the best story in this category

I'll be waiting to read the next chapter. Thanks. Tom

This was written almost 3 years ago. Was there ever a sequel?

holy shit best story ever i wanna read more

I have never come so hard or for so long as I did reading this tonight.

I could see both women vividly and even smell there excitement, so weel was it described.

If you aren't a serious author, you should be

Thank you so much

This sorry got me off great

This may be one of your best stories and unlike most of the others I want to see part 2 on this Mom and John can go to california and have a naughty family orgy. Well done indeed the mistakes I noticed were quickly forgotten in the red hot teasing and or sex play.

Ahab,

You have done another great job of writing. I hope you post it on LTD.

Regards,

Joep

Keep this going!. Please.

Me and the wife loved it!

This was SO FREAKIN' HOT!!!!! What a great idea for a story. And well exectued!!!

WOW!! Fantastic story, I really hope you post part 2 very soon.

I would love to read about them joining the mile high club on the way over. Also would love to read about the two sons getting kinky in front of there moms.

Loved it 5 stars..

I am totally spent. Five stars, favorite stories, favorite author! Don't know what else to say, so I'll go back and read it again. Thanks for sharing.

max52

fantastic story. left wanting more. very adictive story. home we see a story of the upcomming vist.

Excellent Story well Narrated, Pace of the Progress hightened the readers (My ) expectation.

Now, can we have the Sequel: when the Two couples Meet.

and later when the two boys bring along two Girls/ Women.

Ranji from Sri Lanka.

Please Continue with more of this GREAT story!

Naughty mommies...Who'd a thunk it? God bless the cyber age...Even an old canard like truth or dare can be updated...Nicely done, and hot as all hell! Hope you continue the tale...

Simply awesome.

Such an erotic, lustful, yet essentially human and fun story of Mom/Son. Very well told and anybody could see and feel the passion and the glory. Wonderful effort. Please don't stop.

You definitely need to write a follow up to this hot story. It's very similar in content to the submissions of 'Glenda' on 'Actualincest.Com' with her 'Mommy Swapping' ads. Fucking red hot!!

I know it's been a long time since you wrote this and you continue to write very arousing stories as I type.

This story could get so hot if they meet somewhere and carry out the remaining plan. Possibilities once they all say meet in a motel room somewhere are limitless. Move in together as a family is possible.

As usual in my comments to you, not sure if you are into it, but I also love adding male bisexual activity into this.

You talked about a sequel and this was written in 2008 it is now 2012 ! we, your faithful readers want more please.

your writting just get better and better, it like a daniele steel love novel without all the blips.. keep up the great storys.

mel (a man)

without cumming in my hand.

This was great. I agree with one of the readers though, the ending could have been better. Not that it hadn't gotten me off, it did. I was just hoping their first time with their sons would be more intimate and that they'd share their experiences with each other after doing the deed. THEN do the whole webcam dare game. Nevertheless! I haven't checked yet, but I hope there's a sequel to this! Thank you! :)

Some writers and readers. 1 star !!!!!!!

Plus a couple of other things blowing.

That was a underpant ripper.

5*

Felt the game was a bit rushed. Loved it up until that point

have you ever heard of a mic, leaves your hands free.

I DARE YA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .........It was a great read as always, Thanks...LAROC OF AGES

Loved the lead-in eroticism, but tend to agree with shysquirter, that the game could have been more slowly developed, with hesitance from the son's and shyness from the mom's. The struggle of overcoming shyness and inhibitions could have made the story more erotically captivating. But overall...good job!

It's been 5 years since this hot story was written. Any chance of following up with a second part? All your readers would love to see what happens when the two naughty moms and their sons get together.

part one wonderfulll !!! part 2 please

games of dares 2 please , thanks

Can't wait for the sequel,maybe the boys explore each other

I loved loved loved it! Totally horny!

ME: STROKEING HERE. How bout you?

Really good story, believable, with great characters!

Sitting here rock hard! Looking forward to the sequel!

an amazingly well crafted story with some kinky twists and turns. please say you are in the process of writing part two

I know of a woman who did something close to this with her son.

It started with sexy email. then webcamming. she did him on webcam

while chatting with me.

An incredible story of two beautiful and sensual moms patiently, very patiently, emerging from their lives of unfilled sexual need to tease and lure their two sons into a hugely fulfilling, fantasy fuck while staying online with their cross-county partner whose messaging encourage the other to go further and further until they were able to fulfill each other with their sons. I could not get over how much restraint the two moms exercised, over a period of several month, in bringing both themselves and their sons to the point where joint and mutual sexual satisfaction was possible.

Encore! Encore! Bring them together in one place and let us see what they are capable of, after each of the boys has learned how to love their mothers at home. Thank you.

Now that is a loving MOM. WOW

I dare you to let your son plant an incest baby in your motherly womb!

This was a wonderful present to read waiting for Santa to ... Oh hell, I'm Santa and so hot ... And ready to deliver My Present to my bride. I often wondered how many moms ever really approached their big boys. Glad I could read about these two Daring Moms. And their energetic sons.

What I liked MOST about this story is it was told by the two moms. Talk about HOT. On a scale of 1 to 10, this rates a 33!

Great story,,makes one wonder how much this really happens,,,accidently or intentially,,,just gets one thinking...

That was so hot!!!!!! Another Great one. Thank you

wow that was the hotest story I have ever red on literocia ,hope 4 a seacqual

This has been the hottest story I've read so far

A truly great story, especially the way it was told.

I would love to read more please write the next bit . When they all get together .

Except for a few typos here and there, and for saying they could hear each other after saying they couldn't, this is what all writers should aspire to be! Fan-fucking-tastic!!!

Very inventive, arousing, lewd, just what you want in a lit story!

Cant wait for the next part to this story

Love the story was wet from second paragraph on,could see myself wanting to do the same with a daughter.

Keep writing as story was great

Why can’t just one story end with the moms getting what they truly love just from their son but no they have to bring another into the setting. Do people really think Donna and Carmen will only eat each other after fucking in the same room with out fucking the others son??? It no longer a true loving mom and son relationship it just opens the game up for the sons to fuck other girls as they no longer feel the true love for only their moms!!!!