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Nice work, but.......
Being a serious Star Wars fan, I really like this story. On the other hand, if a reader isn't a Star Wars fan, it probably doesn't make any sense. Even so, I have to ask, "what the hell is a 'lekku'?". From context, I gathered it's some sort of leg, but even that came into doubt as the story progressed. Personally, I'm not much into lesbian stories, but this piece is nicely written, and again, as a fan of the movie series, it made for a nice read.
-- KK in Texas
Interesting
decently written, and and a decent lesbo scene to it. But if the characters involved are twi'leks, the "lekku" or brain-tails should be stimulated (the lekku are the twin tentacle-projections that jut down from a twi'leks head)
Awesome
Seriously this story was awesome. Can't wait for the next one.
Well done!
I really loved this story, and I truly hope you do more with this character.
cool
need to make another
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