by Rocket19
I liked the premise of this story, but close to the end it got a bit carried away.
You could have taken the story in a private sexual way, by having jenn get her
Oral, or other... but still a very good story. I liked it. v
SLOW DOWN.
This is a nice set up to slowly build to something. Maybe start with a friend coming to the house and she has to show herself off to them.
I think the best part of a story is the build up, the anticipation and the actual sense of "will they do it?".
Feel free to send me an email as I really like the idea and would be happy to brainstorm ideas with you- my stories have dealt with similar ideas.
I read this as I masturbated and came really hard. Twice. I hope to read more like this.
I would love to blackmail you. Since that won't happen, I'll have to blackmail my wife.
Great idea.