All Comments on 'Blackmail'

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clippymustdieclippymustdieover 8 years ago
i like this story... v

I liked the premise of this story, but close to the end it got a bit carried away.

You could have taken the story in a private sexual way, by having jenn get her

Oral, or other... but still a very good story. I liked it. v

Soma99Soma99over 7 years ago
Good idea but.....

SLOW DOWN.

This is a nice set up to slowly build to something. Maybe start with a friend coming to the house and she has to show herself off to them.

I think the best part of a story is the build up, the anticipation and the actual sense of "will they do it?".

Feel free to send me an email as I really like the idea and would be happy to brainstorm ideas with you- my stories have dealt with similar ideas.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
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I read this as I masturbated and came really hard. Twice. I hope to read more like this.

zooliciouszooliciousover 6 years ago
my turn

I would love to blackmail you. Since that won't happen, I'll have to blackmail my wife.

Great idea.

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