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Between the Lines

byDreambeliever©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/29/08

Nice

Good story, I enjoyed it, Thanks!

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by Jorel145505/29/08

Sweet

Sometimes dreams do come true.

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by Anonymous05/29/08

A very nice story

It's refreshing to know there's still writers out there who can write a good story without all the trash normally associated with these stories. Please write more like this.

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by Anonymous05/29/08

Heavy but Fullfilling.

I realy felt it, and enjoyed it!

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by bruce2205/29/08

That was delightful

A light storyline hinted at in the background and
a really powerful erotic scene. That is what makes
this an interesting place!

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by Anonymous05/30/08

Short but sweet

yes dreams do come true..Keep up the good work.....

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