Daisy Refined Ch. 02

MORE!

it CANT end like that!! OMG MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

I was..

expecting another chapter, a longer, angst-filled installment before the final reconciliation. But it's just the masochist in me, lol. I would have liked some crying jag moments and dramatics before the kiss and make up part. lol As it is, it's a very well-written romance. It tugged at my heartstrings, but it was short, so it wasn't enough to make me teary-eyed. lol Thanks for writing and best regards to you.

Wonderfully romantic

without being overy done. I loved the ending. You really have a way with romance.

Good story

I agree, another chapter would be nice.

wow

very good!

I agree

with all of your new friends. A wonderful story, exquisitely told. Your future is obviously in writing romance.

You know what they say

About always leaving them wanting more. It makes people hungry. Stand-up job with this whole thing, my friend. Warm and excellent. Oh, and I want a cat named Fussbudget now...

A biker chick, huh.

Does Daisy have a tattoo, or is that in chapter three? At the rate this is going can eXcessica be far behind? Well done, TK.

What a wonderful and beautiful story. Thank you for sharing.

An underrated story...

Heart warming and nicely done. Thank you.

Bravo

A lovely heartwarming story. I really enjoyed your style of writing. Please keep up the good work.

Unfinished Love Story

Add another chapter, please....

John is a bastard!

Whatever happened to his marriage vows: in sickness and in health! John caused Donna's mental state when he told her that she was a fat slob! John tells Daisy that he only likes a "little" meat on his women so he must of had some other skinny women before Daisy which pissed Donna off and resulted in her mental problems. John was not a good husband. John was a weasel. I have met bastards like John all of my life. When they are away from the wives, they sweat talk innocent women into their beds with lies!