by Teela
Very well done and in the perfect tense too. BTW: Tantra is not about staying rock hard, it's about generating an extended orgasmic bliss state. My wife and I practiced for nineteen years. Longest recorded session was 7.3 hrs (well, we had to eat). Again, well done and quite an enjoyable read.
Reading this story got me rock hard, so I thought that if I read it again, knowing what happens, it wouldn't affect me as much... but I got even harder. And I kept imagining being in the machine, and got harder and harder.... What can I do???!!
I wish I could witness something like that. I'd get off too. Excellent story!
I love the lady scientist’s enthusiasm- don’t know why but I imagined her as Flo from those Progressive car insurance commercials.
Absolutely loved the story, well written and created a wonderful vision; would love if something like this existed for real. Fantastic work and hope you write more like this.
Great use of monologue and introducing the thoughts of the technician character:) Your language made it easy to understand why the characters enjoyed the scenes. It was so fun to imagine, that (IMHO) the climax parts could have been much longer or had more paragraph spaces.
Interesting concept and great excecution, Ms. Teela. (Forgive me, but I assume you are a woman) I've only read a few short erotic stories for men, but I enjoy how your story is not agreetion-focused, but pleasantly neutral. Plus your pacing with humor was a nice surprise, ha ha.
Keep up the great work!
Thank you for sharing,
GB