All Comments on 'Caught in the Act'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good tail

I liked the story. It should have been a little longer. Although you have left yourself plently of wiggle room for new submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
A tale of two titties

Not great , but it was good . You must work on proofreading . Part 2 should be good .

yakboy69yakboy69almost 14 years ago
Not bad.

Looking forward to chapter two.

goldponygoldponyabout 7 years ago
hmmmmmmmmm

oh shit.....time for the next story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I got confused towards the end because at the beginning one of his daughters was named clare and then it was saying Sara was his daughter

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