All Comments on 'Marriage Troubles Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Passion - exciting!

I don't know why more people don't write about cheating stories on here. It's wrong to cheat...so all you can do is fantasize. That's what I come here for...so damn it I want some good fantasies lol!

Thanks for delivering X!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great story for us married guys....

all we can do is run to the end of our chain and bark. Woof! That was a hot story.

frog1999frog1999almost 16 years ago
WOW - hot story !

WOW..what a hot story ..just loved it ....the building excitement with the wife upstairs in the shower ...his cock thrusting into her hot pussy ...oh yes ....plus the added inter-racial connection.

Great story !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
VERY HOT

LOVED IT !!!!! Made me so wet

Joan @ The Jersey Shore

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
feeling is a wounderful thing

mutual lust?need? whatever, but the passion is nice

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Congrats! X- factor

White man n indian wife,tis realy hot! I'wl liked 2 read more of tis type,i don't like black n white iterracial,its like horror stories not erotic stories,very common!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
...

What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

X---wonderful story and great build up......loved it....why did you stop writing????

Lisabug1021Lisabug1021almost 8 years ago
Loved author's bravery

No fixing it so the wife is ' ok ' with the cheating. Pure cheating is so much hotter. Also, the man's uncontrollable lust made an extremely sexy story soar to new erotic heights. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Good one

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Pl complete it

Nita should get pregnant with the white man's baby. He should suckle milk from her tits after the child is born.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
unfinished

Superbly written, Marriage Troubles is a story that needs to be finished with some sort of resolution. As it is, it leaves the reader "hanging", wanting to know how it all ends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Really enjoying

I truly recollect my days like these ...getting caught is the height of thrill

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