All Comments on 'Carla Michaels'

Well up to your normal high standards

i loved it it was great and it was the perfect blend of love romance and sex

you go man!

One of the HOTTEST stories ! Keep it UP !

With mom's wet pussy wrapped around his cock, and his cum squirting deep into her womb, maybe a little present will develop in nine months. Thanks for the good story.....Rich

Good story, as always.

Great story. Just need more chapters added to this like maybe both couples getting together, swapping partners and having a really wild time.

I've written to you a few times now. I am reading your stories in alphabetical order and each one while having similarities they are unique and wonderful. Your characters all involve love along with raw animal lust, a quality I share myself. I can't wait to inhale the next story. A question, are you published anywhere? I would buy you book(s) if you were- Will

Well done. Real or fantasy -- I could feel the passion and the love. I could see myself as either Johnny or Carla, and I'm a straight guy.

Mother/son incest is the very best and you gave us a double dose.

I read to: - '.. needed to shave' every 'inch of her body "..

And .. 'froze' me ..

I'm getting lost interest for reading all what you further write - and anything else written by you.

- A pity .. Because it was exciting to this point :(

Terrible grammar missing words bad spelling whoever edits your stuff is not that great .All stories are pretty much in the same boat as far as that is concerned. Good story overall but still to padded out with over explaining stuff

You keep doing what you're doing those are some beautiful stories

vice is nice but incest is best.....

Pretty much the best story on here!!!

Beautiful story of a mother receiving son in her pussy and son giving his mom all his cum. How nice if he impregnated his mother with his own cum. Mother will be glowing being knocked up by her own son.

One of the best stories I've read so far,wish it went on for longer

That was one of the hottest stories I have ever read!! WOW.....

nothing can compare with the beauty of a son's penis in his own mother's vagina

passed out! My body is shaking and my pussy is shuttering!! I'm shaking and I have a pool of my cum under me and all over my thighs and it's sticky!! Thank you for such a hot hot story!!! Is there a trade between the mothers coming?

One question.....what was the son's plan with the boat?

One suggestion ...your hand has a thumb not a thump !

Thanks Don

My first suggestion is that you have someone edit your stories (a good idea for most writers), as there are lots of typos and errors that should be cleaned up. It would make your stories even more enjoyable to read.

Second, you do something that just about everyone does in this forum; you over-embellish descriptions. For instance, Carla doesn't have an ass, Carla has a meaty ass. Carla doesn't have a pussy, she has a tiny pussy. Stating she has a meaty ass is fine, but saying it almost every time is redundant, and detracts from the story, not adds to it. Saying it once or twice is sufficient.

YOUR COMBINING OF LUST AND LUST IS EXCELLENT. HOWEVER,YOU NEED BETTER EDITING. STILL IN ALL WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE OF CARLA AND JOHNNY,PAUL AND JENNY.

SORRY! IT'S SUPPOSE TO READ ' LUST AND LOVE' . NOT LUST AND LUST.

I could care less about the typos and other errors. The story reads well just like all of your other mom/son stories. Keep up the good work.

Again a really great story. Just ignore all the pseudo "English Teachers" who would complain about a missed participle or comma.

Please continue to write, i'll look forward to more of your " great stuff."

as usual AAA+ love your work.

makes you want to be in that family

As usual LA, you again perked the interests of your readers w/this one. It was sensual, sexual, erotic and damn good arousing. Your explanations of their thoughts and actions were of a tangy taste. If I were you, I wouldn't worry about THOSE that bug you about the misspelling of a word, punctuation mark or suck. Your stories, especially the Incest-Mom & Son give a new meaning to the word, 'Hard-On'

She is too old. I don't like a story when the woman is out of or almost out of child bearing age. 36 to 38 at most would be much better.

1 star...dumped

Need to do another chapter

5 stars for your storyline but 1 for your mistakes. Carla was 49 when the story started then she was 45 a short while later. Sloppy mistake plus get an editor for the many more typos.