I can easily imagine the improving quality of you future endeavors as your command of grammar and composition receives top grades. You also have the ability to put into your compositions the depth and quality of erotic emotions that are missing in so many who try such a worthy topic. Lots of luck- keep up the good work - and I really look forward to your future efforts.
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Anonymous06/04/08
Skilled
This and the first chapter are very erotic without being obscene i.e likely to offend. There is a big difference between pornography and erotica,I look forward to reading more from you.
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Anonymous06/04/08
One Little Mistake
is capable of putting an observant reader completely "off" a story. I share the favorable comments of the first two responders, but, when the time line of the first chapter makes it very clear that "The Present" is only nine months after the crash of their financial fortunes, and is therefore, the time of the painting scene, it can disturb the reader when you announce an episode as "2 years earlier" when it is clearly only three months earlier.
I erred big time on the time-line. I have no excuse except to say...I'm blond! My apologies to you readers (I can't submit this without a rating-I gotta love it don't I?). Alexxxis
is exactly as you have portrayed your-self well done ,if the situation had arisen in real life then given the circumstances i see this as a solution toboth mum and sons sexual needs so please keep up the good work and hurry with next chapters , well writen ,good content above all else BELIEVABLE .
I loved this! It is excellent wotk! the story is very erotic and the layout great for more telling both future and past! Great work!
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Anonymous02/15/11
Loved your story
I loved your story about taking care of your son. I hope that this the end of the story. I know that you have alot of stories to go with this one.I hope to read more of them. Keep up the good work
I've been used to reading a favorite erotic artist that writes with much description and long stories that resolve themselves at the end, so having shorter stories to read is a real change of pace. I appreciate your ability to write succinctly and erotically in 3 pages, two pages, even one page as you have done with these two stories. I couldn't keep from wondering how his paid nurse handled all of the "needs" the son has/had. He seemed pretty experienced in going to the breasts and the sensuous licks (and yet no intercourse) and one wonders how he and the nurse got along for all those years. Maybe a series of prequels and then back to the present again would continue the saga of the armless man and his mom. At any rate, this was a bit of a switch, no Alexis, and no hardcore sex, but just a loving relationship between two people with needs and accommodations to satisfy them. Again I thank you Alexxxis for spending your time and expertise to satisfy your Lit readers.
English
Keep up the good work !
I can easily imagine the improving quality of you future endeavors as your command of grammar and composition receives top grades. You also have the ability to put into your compositions the depth and quality of erotic emotions that are missing in so many who try such a worthy topic. Lots of luck- keep up the good work - and I really look forward to your future efforts.
Skilled
This and the first chapter are very erotic without being obscene i.e likely to offend. There is a big difference between pornography and erotica,I look forward to reading more from you.
One Little Mistake
is capable of putting an observant reader completely "off" a story. I share the favorable comments of the first two responders, but, when the time line of the first chapter makes it very clear that "The Present" is only nine months after the crash of their financial fortunes, and is therefore, the time of the painting scene, it can disturb the reader when you announce an episode as "2 years earlier" when it is clearly only three months earlier.
oops!
I erred big time on the time-line. I have no excuse except to say...I'm blond! My apologies to you readers (I can't submit this without a rating-I gotta love it don't I?). Alexxxis
How a loving mum should be
is exactly as you have portrayed your-self well done ,if the situation had arisen in real life then given the circumstances i see this as a solution toboth mum and sons sexual needs so please keep up the good work and hurry with next chapters , well writen ,good content above all else BELIEVABLE .
Super Great! Keep em coming!
I loved this! It is excellent wotk! the story is very erotic and the layout great for more telling both future and past! Great work!
Loved your story
I loved your story about taking care of your son. I hope that this the end of the story. I know that you have alot of stories to go with this one.I hope to read more of them. Keep up the good work
Short and Sweet....and erotic too
I've been used to reading a favorite erotic artist that writes with much description and long stories that resolve themselves at the end, so having shorter stories to read is a real change of pace. I appreciate your ability to write succinctly and erotically in 3 pages, two pages, even one page as you have done with these two stories. I couldn't keep from wondering how his paid nurse handled all of the "needs" the son has/had. He seemed pretty experienced in going to the breasts and the sensuous licks (and yet no intercourse) and one wonders how he and the nurse got along for all those years. Maybe a series of prequels and then back to the present again would continue the saga of the armless man and his mom. At any rate, this was a bit of a switch, no Alexis, and no hardcore sex, but just a loving relationship between two people with needs and accommodations to satisfy them. Again I thank you Alexxxis for spending your time and expertise to satisfy your Lit readers.
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