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Pain and Pleasure Intersect

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/02/08

Very nice!

Showing a more deviant side are we? It's short and to the point without sacrificing a nice descriptive element!

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by bluebell06/05/08

Uncommonly Good

This is an excellent poem, love. I think you hit the notes with precise timing, clarity, and brevity. The imagery is distilled down to the simplest and yet most effective components- it's remarkable. I think this is really a great stride in your writing. Well done.

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