All Comments on 'Pain and Pleasure Intersect'

Showing a more deviant side are we? It's short and to the point without sacrificing a nice descriptive element!

This is an excellent poem, love. I think you hit the notes with precise timing, clarity, and brevity. The imagery is distilled down to the simplest and yet most effective components- it's remarkable. I think this is really a great stride in your writing. Well done.