All Comments on 'Who's The Boss? Ch. 05'

You are doing an awesome job writing this story. Loving the direction it's going in. Totally keeping me on my toes. Can't wait for more!

good series

I enjoyed the sries so far hope you take her further and darker in into submission

Your craft as a writer is awesome. Bravo to you. :-)

I have never been one for meaningless relationships. Never went out with a guy that didn't want to commit to me (ok a few exceptions, but those were on my terms). ANYWAY, I think that if he didn't care about her, he wouldn't have felt guilt at all. Guilt enough to turn away every man's fantasy. If he didn't care at all, he would keep up with the game. Maybe he's just a nice guy. In the end, I am sure she will have her way. Please let there be a happy ending! Reading on...

"Unbelievable!"