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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/05/08

Third World

This is how we went from super power to third world status.

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by Anonymous06/05/08

I didn't like

the use of present tense to tell the story. Somehow it seems awkward. Other than that, the story was ok; not great, but ok.

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by Anonymous06/08/08

Hot Action

I liked the hot steamy action.

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by beautylips08/27/08

sweet

I really liked this story...it was erotic with a lil twist.

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by Anonymous08/09/09

Nonsense

OH NO, people of two different races having sex! IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD

Good story.

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by Anonymous12/26/14

Huh?

Ridiculous.

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