All Comments on 'Humilation at the Power Exchange'

by chainedkitten11

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fourwhlr4everfourwhlr4everalmost 16 years ago
good start

dont let the bloggers that whine about grammer get to you keep postin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
GREAT JOB!

Apparently the asshole who left a racist comment can't seem to understand that this was an interracial story...hence why he/she continued to read it until the end. Which means that they had the PERSONAL RESPONSEBLITY to STOP READING if they didn't like the context. It was a great story (speaking as a black woman) and I hope there is a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Very good first story!

Good!

Hope to see (read) more. Not a complex story, but for the length, perfect!

MastersallMastersallalmost 16 years ago
Excellent !

Loved the story and your writing. I might consider leaving off the last

paragraph but then that is being just picky...keep writing !

MastersallMastersallalmost 16 years ago
Excellent !

Loved the story and your writing. I might consider leaving off the last

paragraph but then that is being just picky...keep writing !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I would guess that your true self

comes out in your writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
loved it

keep writing you're pissing off the ass w/o a name!!!

BAD BOY BILLBAD BOY BILLalmost 16 years ago
Nasty lil' slut

Great story...when can I meet you at the Power Exchange?

I'll make you dress just like in your story...from Concord,Ca.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What most people dont understand is that if the

story is interracial, it is on its own strength racist. You cant point out race in matters without being racist or reverse racist. Grow up people get some brains.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

this was a good first submission i'd love to see you continue writting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
First time

Always wanted to go to the Power Exchange. Never made it myself. Excited to read this story. Please continue. This is a good first story.

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