All Comments on 'The Whore At My Door'

by Akito01

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
Pirate TregarePirate Tregarealmost 16 years ago
Uniquely original!

Not only an unusual plot, but well laid out and well written, with just enough extra-sexual detail mixed in with the sexual. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Liked it...

It was different. I don't know if this actually happened, but it could have. It's a big, weird world out there. Keep writing!

toJohnny7toJohnny7almost 16 years ago
Talking is over rated . . .

She seemed to have the important stuff down. I think many men, make that many people, would want a partner that did what they said, offered sex often, and didn't give them any crap.

JamesHunterJamesHunterabout 11 years ago
Loved it!

I liked this - well written and entertaining. A good reminder of the trouble our "little heads" can get us into as well! And I agree, she might make someone a fine wife, she certainly has her good points, language skills can come later!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I agree!

I would stick to Spanish girls/women too, since I learned Spanish very well it would be no problem!

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77almost 3 years ago

Well-written, but the ending was disappointing. “Yellow fever” is a 100% thing. I wish he would have stuck with her and knocked her up!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous