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The Whore At My Door

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by Pirate Tregare06/07/08

Uniquely original!

Not only an unusual plot, but well laid out and well written, with just enough extra-sexual detail mixed in with the sexual. Well done!

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by Anonymous06/07/08

Liked it...

It was different. I don't know if this actually happened, but it could have. It's a big, weird world out there. Keep writing!

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by toJohnny706/10/08

Talking is over rated . . .

She seemed to have the important stuff down. I think many men, make that many people, would want a partner that did what they said, offered sex often, and didn't give them any crap.

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by JamesHunter03/24/13

Loved it!

I liked this - well written and entertaining. A good reminder of the trouble our "little heads" can get us into as well! And I agree, she might make someone a fine wife, she certainly has her good points, language skills can come later!

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