She seemed to have the important stuff down. I think many men, make that many people, would want a partner that did what they said, offered sex often, and didn't give them any crap.
I liked this - well written and entertaining. A good reminder of the trouble our "little heads" can get us into as well! And I agree, she might make someone a fine wife, she certainly has her good points, language skills can come later!
Uniquely original!
Not only an unusual plot, but well laid out and well written, with just enough extra-sexual detail mixed in with the sexual. Well done!
Liked it...
It was different. I don't know if this actually happened, but it could have. It's a big, weird world out there. Keep writing!
Talking is over rated . . .
She seemed to have the important stuff down. I think many men, make that many people, would want a partner that did what they said, offered sex often, and didn't give them any crap.
Loved it!
I liked this - well written and entertaining. A good reminder of the trouble our "little heads" can get us into as well! And I agree, she might make someone a fine wife, she certainly has her good points, language skills can come later!
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