another great twist! I am loving this story! Wosh it was coming faster. Have to say I was a lil suprised and disappointed that Calista would chear on her Master after all they have been through. She has always been so devotes to him and it seemed like a real love was developing there.
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Anonymous06/15/08
Fine Work
Well written and fascinating storyline. I started reading them this morning and just read your request for feedback... sorry I didn't respond sooner. I am new here... Anyway... Bravo!!! Love the intrigue as well as the erotica.
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Anonymous09/09/10
Excellent!
I cannot stop reading this series! Hate to see it end, please continue writing :)
great twist
another great twist! I am loving this story! Wosh it was coming faster. Have to say I was a lil suprised and disappointed that Calista would chear on her Master after all they have been through. She has always been so devotes to him and it seemed like a real love was developing there.
Fine Work
Well written and fascinating storyline. I started reading them this morning and just read your request for feedback... sorry I didn't respond sooner. I am new here... Anyway... Bravo!!! Love the intrigue as well as the erotica.
Excellent!
I cannot stop reading this series! Hate to see it end, please continue writing :)
this is so good!
I am in love with your series! It is like nothing I've ever read! Please consider putting it in print as I would love a hard copy for myself!
Great story !
I love these slave stories and this one is excellent and quite unusual in that she isn't trying to get away which is a nice twist.:-)
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