i really liked this although it was the first chapter that i have read in this series. my only problem was that it was too short! please continue writing!
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Anonymous06/08/08
The author should try a little submission
Might make a Man of him--He certainly is not one now
by
Anonymous06/08/08
too short
too short...but the Master did have Calista flagged...so i guess the punishment was deserved
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Anonymous06/09/08
Please Continue Your Story!
what unexpected turns this story has taken! Yes, chapter 09 was very short, but it leaves us wondering.
It would be easy to judge the Master, but with the setting set as "Life in the Harem," he is acting in character. However, I am anxious to read the resolution of this event!
Please do continue.
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Anonymous03/24/13
LOVE!
I can not get enough of this story! Can't wait to see what happens!
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1st comment!
i really liked this although it was the first chapter that i have read in this series. my only problem was that it was too short! please continue writing!
The author should try a little submission
Might make a Man of him--He certainly is not one now
too short
too short...but the Master did have Calista flagged...so i guess the punishment was deserved
Please Continue Your Story!
what unexpected turns this story has taken! Yes, chapter 09 was very short, but it leaves us wondering.
It would be easy to judge the Master, but with the setting set as "Life in the Harem," he is acting in character. However, I am anxious to read the resolution of this event!
Please do continue.
LOVE!
I can not get enough of this story! Can't wait to see what happens!
Whoa
Can't wait to see what happens next!
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