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Not a bad story.
I enjoyed your story, but it seemed a little short. It seems as if you hurried the last bit to end the story. You could have told us more about the other events that happened later in the summer or continued the story with a chapter 2...Although you no longer speak of the relations you had then do you ever continue them now? Do you wish they did? Do these four ever meet up for a "time away" later on?
Had potenital
But hurried. Everything could/should have been more detailed. The girls'a questioning could have had many more steps. The 'showing' the breasts and cock were too matter-of-fact. Why didn't he feel the girls' breasts before they felt his cock? If he had, perhaps one girl could have been more eacer and willing and the other shier any less willing -- she could have been convinced to let him feel her by seeing how her sister was enjoying the caressing, etc. How did the breasts feel? To him? To her? How were one girls breasts 'different' than the other's? How about some kissing/licking of breasts and nipples. How did THAT feel to him/her? The third sister's involvelemt was MUCH too hurried.
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