All Comments on 'Mira Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
great addition

I am soo glad you added another one this one was good to and thank you for having him stop her.. I know he loves mira and she him it wouldn't have seemed right if he let the girl do that..I love this story it is original and lovely hope for more soon..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I WIN!

Hahahah I WIN! I'm the first to make a public Comment...

and you made another story befoe my bday! lol. COOL LOOK you have 20 more days to write another chapter or two... or three! hahahaha Love the story, and awww he didn't cheat on mira...i'm telling you, mira and him are going to work it out, dont argue with me missy. End of story! lol

Can't wait for the next

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenalmost 16 years ago
It's a wonderful story

I love this plot. Can't wait for the next.

EliannaEliannaalmost 16 years ago
Love those vampires

Don't you just love those honorable honorable, tortured monsters? You always create such layered characters and Rillan is no exception. Good job!

WildAngel4UWildAngel4Ualmost 16 years ago
*Applause*

You definitely know how to make a girl's heart ache for the pain that he suffers. I'm so glad that you are continuing with this story. Its amazing!

HonourHonouralmost 16 years ago
What a delight

You are a gifted writer and entice us with you each page of the way.

bad_girl69bad_girl69almost 16 years ago
WOOHOO!

lol. This was a good chapter. Its sad that Rillan had to leave Mira behind :(..... but im sure it will be good when ever he returns home to her ... hehe... Please hurry :D

redneckwomanredneckwomanover 15 years ago
keep it coming!!!

I said it before and I'll say it again, you write as well as Ann Rice and I'm addicted!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love this story.

I just stumbled upon this work of art and I must say. This is the first time I have delved into erotic horror, even after years of reading on this site. Your story is absolutley captivating. It's like you have this knack for not disappointing but also keeping it your own story. I've read most your stories and I must say the good and dark points of it are just amazing. Keep writing :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
lol

i love this story, i keep rereading it, but the last part i would have just been like "he's gay" and walked away. haha

Archangel_MArchangel_Malmost 12 years ago
Whew

I would have started foaming at the mouth if Rillan hadn't stopped her. I'm not sure if it's an inborn male thing or if it's how I was raised, but the idea of cheating makes me crazy. It's good to see that Rillan is as good a man as I believed him to be. :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
nope, I agree

Archangel, I'm a guy, and I agree with you: I hate cheating. It doesn't matter to me which person is cheating, because it disgusts me regardless.

sofia57sofia57over 11 years ago
grrrrr can't stop reading

well I need to stop even though I CAN'T I love this story... But I need to clean up lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Oh wow, okay

Oh wow um I mean I didn't actually realise he was DEAD that's not really my version of the general topic of vampires, but yeah great!! I'm not being sarcastic. I like that if that's really how you see them.

Personally I don't see them as the whole "devil incarnate" but yes, I like your version and I think it's beautifully written you really made a beautiful story and I'm really glad to have read it. That being said I've read the whole thing in one sitting and I'm kind of a little bit overwhelmed. Haha

ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyover 6 years ago

This is a story that I will come back to and read again. LOVE your writing, your stories, and your characters!

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